Initiation
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Chapter One - Earnest Desire
For now...just sit back and enjoy. email me for some constructive critisism. i really appreciate that... big thanx too skie strife for inspiring me to write this story as well as some other friends... now....on to the story...
Sexual Adventures Of Jordan
All she can do is critisize me and put me down." she rubs her upper left arm lightly where the bruise was when she first got there from her grandmothers room.
Derek Does... Chapter 2 - His Dad's Boss
Constructive critisism is muchly appreciated! enjoy this new chapter!
PH-5
Be they praise, or (keep it constructive please) critisism. "the planet ph-5. a fertile land full of lush vegetation and wild animals. it's no wonder that a school of wildlife research was built here to monitor and study the flora and fauna.
The House Dahan part II: Chen's second day, part 2
Once again i urge anyone with constructive critisism to come out with it. so once again we shall assume you've not accidentally made a profile on an obviously adult site and opened this story. let's give your intellectual capacity that much credit.
The Power of Imagionation Part One
This is my first story so critisism is welcome! rember: if you dont like it dont read it. simba is copyright of disney.
All You Need is Love: Chapter 1
critisism is therefore appreciated so long as it's constructive.) david walked out of the large building shaking uncontrollably.
Chronicals of the Black Guard: Chapter 3
Never once critisizing or complaining that he should have done this or that. what suprised him most was, as he finished, he felt her arms slide around his shoulders, hugging him softly from behind.
Inner City Fun
/// hmm where to go....where to go....might become a series might not. and critisism and the like all welcome here
a magical night (alpha and omega)
I would appreciate some constructive critisism, thanks.
Runaway Hostel Chapter 1
I won't mind some constructive critisism :3_ _anyways, i delay_ _you long enough. enjoy!