[1] Starting A Family: Conception
This piece is largely unedited, though i may end up posting more raw documents instead of getting bogged down with editing. if i find a proofreader, that'd be great, but i'm unsure of my ability to do that without a source of income to sustain it.
Lewd times with Sky Shaymin
His tail felt as soft as bog cotton. when he withdrew his snout from my mouth, smiling gently, the fur was matted with moisture. eyes of deep green, like homalomena, beheld mine.
Die Lehrlingsqueste - So viel Mühe
Richard bog den rücken durch und keuchte die felswand an. was dieses wesen, diese monströse weib mit ihm machte ging über jede kunst hinaus, die er sich in kargen nächten ausgemalt hätte.
Das Unwetter I
Schniefend lies er es zu, dass sie sein bein anhob und den schwanz soweit nach hinten bog, bis er leise aufschreien musste.
Verregnetes Wochenende
Langsam schob sich das fehrzeug vorbei und bog nocheinmal hab, dann verschwand es langsam in der ferne.
Shattered Glass Chapter 8: Rampant
I could feel my being holding pain that's has accumulated for so long, like a computer bogged down from running to many programs.
Zion: Light of the New Moon Part 2, Ch 1.3 Doen
I glanced to my unconscious companions, "how long will the bog berry potion last?" "until..." rozs swallowed audibly, "...perhaps noon."
SRC-01 Cold Hooves, Ch 02
You could have landed in a sticky bog in the far south territories. and how messy that would have been because there is no telling when any reindeer would have found you. so what do you say? join up in exchange for the knowledge to get home?
Ice Dungeon
A tall boulder in a dire bog marks the entrance to this dungeon. "we'll execute you tomorrow afternoon, now undress," he commented after we entered into a room. the room was large and eerie. it had the smell of death and corpses.
Writing Advice: Show, Tell, Adverbs and Others
So the advantage of 'telling' is that you can summarize details that slow things down too much, preventing your story getting bogged down in unnecessary detail.
Little Wolf, Big Ordeal CH. 4
Turning away from the carcass, he sloshed through the bog towards the treeline again. alas, he made it but halfway. his head was spinning. his stomach was a wild ocean. with a splash, the little wolf fell down into the bog.
Zoo to Zoo
None of the kittens had names yet, as voting and ideas and committees and such had bogged down over whether they wanted to give them african or indian names, let the community suggest them, or just let the primary handlers themselves pick out names.