"Scribe" Chapter 34
It also has the latest revision shielding and cooling assemblies so your cooling system will be under substantially less stress. not to mention a twenty percent increase in power output.
World Domination
Name needs revision. step one, injection the first stage is called injection because it describes what will happen during the phase. duh.
Civilization Takes Another Hit.
Maybe i'll continue to edit, revise, "ad moar" as it were. what will happen in the story? who knows? you tell me, and we'll see. i will be honest though, this was a bit shorter than i had in mind. like, way shorter... i will come back, though.
A Unicorn Seduction (Revised)
A Unicorn Seduction Karen groaned as she punched out for the day. Her tech support job paid decently enough, but it could be very stressful some days. Such as today, which she'd spent dealing with COMPLETE AND TOTAL MORONS both in the office and on...
Dragons Lair pt 27
I spent the last hour revising this, taking out bits i didnt like and even deleting a blowjob because i thought it didnt work with what i wanted to do.
Hunter's Moon (revised version)
#1 of hunter's moon author's note: this is the revised version of my original story. i had to remove some gaping plot holes. italics means telepathic messages. disclaimer: all the people in the story are fictional.
"Daggers of Darkness" - Epilogue
#20 of daggers of darkness, book 1, into the black here's the (revised) epilogue for the first book of my sci-fi adventure series, "daggers of darkness, book 1, into the black".
Facing the Real World 2: Maturing. (Scrapped)
I must go now and it isn't revised so forgive me. this is all i have.**
Behind Yellow Eyes: Chapter 5
"my wetware's military grade, top revision three, secret class. you're coming with me." marcus's eyes grow wide. "what? no way!" the little runt is building up anger of his own.
Expulsion from the Herd
If you would like to suggest anything or revise part of my stories for more efficient and proper grammar, please feel free. i am horrible about revising my own work. :) thanks, and enjoy!
Fairy Tails - Red Riding Hood
May go back sometime soon and do a revision and lengthen it. fairy tale stories - red riding hood selena gave a soft giggle, smoothing out the skimpy outfit that her boyfriend got her to wear.
White Surprise Revised
Authors note: ok, slightly revised this story, name change, couple of spelling errors, few wording changes, nothing big, still just a one off unless a sequel visits me. oh, and one tiny little tie to my spreader bar universe.