I didn't like the original start, writing from the readers perspective was leading to a very poor repetitive sentence structure. also the characters seemed a little too fully set and i wanted to give you guys more choice.
Bear, Feline, Fox, Furcadians, Gay, M/M, Mage, Male, Naga, Reptile, Sisco, barbarian, furcadia, thief, wizard
All the events were basically the same, but the perception of those events from a reader's perspective was completely different.
before, when the reader knew about the false trail, it made ander look foolish.
Ander, Clean, Fox, Novel, Serial, Story, Wolf
From readers perspective. character purposely left nameless.
7.4k words.
a freezing, gentle winter night.
dark as obsidian, cold as pluto.
Alligator, Anal, Cuddling, Gay, Handholding, Homosexual, Male/Male, Riding, Rimming, Romance, Size Difference, Slitfuck, Winter, husband, married
I see a lot of stories with reader's perspective, only 1.5 of which were my own, but i rarely see any of them where the reader is the dominant one. maybe i'm just looking in the wrong places, but i thought this would be fun.
Cum Inflation, First Time, Gay, Handjob, Honey cum, Honey saliva, Hyper balls, Kissing, Musk, Pheromones, Reader POV, dating, deepthroating, honey
These i made up for added interest and entertainment from a story writers and reader's perspective. thank you for taking time to read my chapters as i write them.
Anal, Athletic, Balls, Beach, Bisexual, Blowjob, Bulge, Character Development, College, Cougar, Cum, Dragon, Drunk, Emotional, Erection, Frottage, Gay, Gryphon, Locker Room, Orgasm, Orgasm Denial, Otter, Precum, Prostate, Shower, Stallion, Virgin