Scratch Post 1 - Inner Editor
structured writing is a technique i will drill into my readers. maybe i can change your mind on it. what are some techniques you use to combat your inner editor? you should let us know in the comments! keep writing! -lily, scratchpost press
It's all in the Structure
You are to discuss the structural purpose of these. to help, i would try to ask this question as well: obviously, this piece is a binary, but is it sectional, or continuous?
Threads - Laura's Story
The arm structure and feet gave it away as she shivered in his warm lap. this was the day, that alex decided to turn against societies rules, and begin to help the carbine. he just wasn't sure how.
Deep Structure: Part 1
Deep structure chapter 1: white stallion ------- too much rum, too much bourbon, far too much tequila. that's what was going through mike's system.
The kitten who loved watermelons: Part 1
Percy, a young teenage cat, felt like he was getting closer to finding them than he had ever been so far in all his months of searching. The black cat was shorter than all his friends and had a fluffy coat. Those two traits both contributed to him...
Birthday Game: The Morning After
Paul was the first to retire on the night of his older brother's party. The pup was not accustomed to staying up late, and certain strenuous activities further exhausted him. Some of the friends of Jake, the older brother, were dismayed that they...
The Lion in Love
"A lion demanded the daughter of a woodcutter in marriage. The father was unwilling to grant, and yet afraid to refuse his request. Then he realized this was the perfect chance to rid himself of both problems at once. He told the lion that he was not...
Summer Fun
Rachel was over joyed. Summer was finally here, and she was going to spend it at the house of her Aunt and Uncle. The young rat lived north, where it was always cold, but she remembers fondly the times she spent at the beach as a runt. She had...
Porn in Nature: Ants and Aphids
"Hum hum hum," a little golden aphid sang a cheery tune to himself as he suckled happily at the stem of the plant. He was so carefree at this very moment, with nothing to worry about. No worries about predators, no worries about food, no worries about...
Short Stories with Cassandra
Cassandra had a problem. The 6 year old lion cub's behavior started out as just a strange quirk, but is escalated to the point that her parents needed to see a specialist, a scene we are watching unfold "Why don't you tell me how her...
Games, Sex, and Some Positive Suggestion
This isn't realy a story, just some ideas I had floating around that I wanted to pin down in word form. I had never written about hypnosis before, and I feel like I left out a lot of details. But I wanted it to be short, cause I hate long stories, so I...
Birthday Game
Bored. Short story because I'm horny. Not proof-read because I'm lazy. Leave comments because I want to know how better to please you. Paul, an eight year-old german shepherd puppy, looked up at his nineteen year-old brother...