Puppy Love Chapter 5

I have no idea how it will end, so any ideas, comments, and critiques are welcome. flames will be laughed at and discarded._ i rolled over to look at the clock by my bed. 1:24 a.m.

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Team Smartz Ch.1 - Lucky Penny

Comments & critiques are appreciated (i want real, constructive criticism dammit!)

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The Garden

Because of how old it is you're free to post honest opinions about the quality or style, but not any serious critique because i've made steps in different, more serious writing. xd i have no idea what tags to use for this.

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Your Heat (F/Solo, 2nd Person)

I would love suggestions/critiques here. you are walking through your apartment when a sudden twinge in your nethers catches you by surprise, and your heart starts to speed up.

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Smuggling Parasites, Chapter 4

: thanks to shaylor for the invaluable critique, proof-reading, and editing. disclaimer!!! this story contains some weird stuff, please check the tags before reading!

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Separation Anxiety F Glaceon X M Trainer

* * * this is my first time writing in this style so critique and comments are appreciated. i haven't written smut in some time so i might be a little rusty regardless i am happy with the result.

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Daily Tale 07/24/14: Sick Day

If you could give me feedback and critique i'd love it. also, if you find any grammar or spelling errors please point them out. i also encourage all you furs who are writers or who want to write to try this idea and see how much they improve.

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Friendly Shenanigans--teaser

Just a little teaser chapter ;3 first adult work so please critique! ben collapsed on the bench in front of his locker.

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Path of the Lion (Dramatis Personae)

Kingdoms enjoined #1 - path of the lion okay - so i've had my reservations about uploading this anywhere because the kingdoms enjoined trilogy is something that i really intend to be my magnum opus, but i finally decided that uploading it here and getting some critique

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The MacAllseter Monologs

I am open to critique as this story is a work in progress and has been a big stretch for me as i wrote it i have found the point of view rather limiting.

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