_this is a first draft of a multi-part story i'm writing with a friend. a preview, of one of my parts, that i think stands alone fairly well.
Bull, Domination/Submission, F/M, Femdom, Fighting, Lioness, M/F, Master/Pet, Overstim
Edited version of my first draft
(things with weird names are in latin, they should be in italics but it didn't transfer)
it's not pleasant being struck with lightning. neither is being trapped underwater for a minute straight.
Action, Adventure, Fighting
The foxtaur stretched hir arms over hir head, happy with the first draft of the scene. it was definitely one of hir spicier works. let the publisher see what they think about that!
but first, moonstruck realized shi had more pressing needs.
Cum, Fox, Foxtaur, Hermaphrodite, Lactation, Masturbation, Taur
This first draft of my series has about a page's worth of writing i did that won't be in episode 2. figured i'd post it to show progression though.
the scene with simon and bacon will get cut.
the scene with amber will get cut.
Feline, Female, Male, Reptile
The first draft of this sucker clocked in at over 2,300 words. i trimmed it down to 2,091 words, but i couldn't bring myself to cut any more for fear it would disrupt the flow of the action.
Adult Content, Aqua Sex, Bad Language, Big Boobs, Bikini, Bra, Canine, Clit, F/F, Fingering, Flirtation, Groping, Lesbian, Lust, Naughty, Orgasm, Partial Strip, Poodle, Pool, Pussy, Rodent, Short Story, Squirrel, Summer, SummerAdventures 2014, Swimsuit, Teasing, Teen, Teenagers, Underwater, Wet
#1 of story drafts - for sf member critique
this is the first draft of the first chapter in my story series that i am writing. this is a critique piece only, and not the final draft!
feel free to comment, or offer suggestions.
Adult Content, Birth, Cougar, Fantasy, Feline, Female, Lioness, Male, Panther, Puma, Story Series, Tribal, shaman, world
The is a first draft of what is the first orr family chronicles novel on the schedule for publication (no dates yet, probably a few years away) it is the first book planned in a trilogy.
Drama, Female, Gay, Gazelle, Male, Manipulation, Story Progression, Tiger, discussion, no sex
This is a first draft of what is the first orr family chronicles novel on the schedule for publication (no dates yet, probably a few years away) it is the first book planned in a trilogy.
Drama, Female, Gay, Goat, Male, Story Progression, Tiger, conflict, discussion, no sex
Now that he has his own phone, patrick hands the number out to the people who can use it and finds out something about that that isn't usual
the is a first draft of what is the first orr family chronicles novel on the schedule for publication (no dates yet
Drama, Gay, Male, Story Progression, Tiger, conflict, no sex
Patrick's mother is getting an opportunity at her workplace, and patrick encourages her to take it because it plays into something he is planning
the is a first draft of what is the first orr family chronicles novel on the schedule for publication (no dates
Drama, Female, Gay, Male, Story Progression, Tiger, no sex
Note, this is a first draft and therefore prone to spelling errors and grammatical mistakes. hopefully not many though, as i try to keep fairly tight first drafts.
Lion