The Missing Son, Chapter 40
This is a first draft of what is the first orr family chronicles novel on the schedule for publication (no dates yet, probably a few years away) it is the first book planned in a trilogy.
The Missing Son, Chapter 05
A quiet evening for patrick, attending church after his afternoon at the junkyard the is a first draft of what is the first orr family chronicles novel on the schedule for publication (no dates yet, probably a few years away) it is the first book planned in
Double Dip
The first draft of this sucker clocked in at over 2,300 words. i trimmed it down to 2,091 words, but i couldn't bring myself to cut any more for fear it would disrupt the flow of the action.
Blood, Sex & Metal - Episode 2 Cut Bits
This first draft of my series has about a page's worth of writing i did that won't be in episode 2. figured i'd post it to show progression though. the scene with simon and bacon will get cut. the scene with amber will get cut.
Second Draft of First Story
Edited version of my first draft (things with weird names are in latin, they should be in italics but it didn't transfer) it's not pleasant being struck with lightning. neither is being trapped underwater for a minute straight.
Touch (Yourself) Typing: Freebies Vol. 60
The foxtaur stretched hir arms over hir head, happy with the first draft of the scene. it was definitely one of hir spicier works. let the publisher see what they think about that! but first, moonstruck realized shi had more pressing needs.
Black Project Files Chapter 8: The Time Vertsex Part 1
#11 of black project files first draft night 1 day 0/ 2036: nasa moon base comm.
Tawny: A Preview
_this is a first draft of a multi-part story i'm writing with a friend. a preview, of one of my parts, that i think stands alone fairly well.
The Myrakkari Chronicles (v.1.0) Chapter One
#1 of story drafts - for sf member critique this is the first draft of the first chapter in my story series that i am writing. this is a critique piece only, and not the final draft! feel free to comment, or offer suggestions.
Lenny Gets a Job: As a Maid in a Mansion
It's another rough first draft (as is the theme here in "forgotten drafts"). i had planned to do a series about lenny sow, a hopeless manchild who tries and tries to get a job and fails and fails spectacularly at every one.
Don't Let Go
The first draft was much shorter and much, much more sympathetic toward the church. this one is less so, but the character still wanted very much to belong, and so i kept a lot of what is frankly christian buzzwords and propaganda.
New Prologue for Todd's Senior Prom
My main question, really, is do i need a prologue like this or would i be better diving straight in like i did in the first draft?