Ch. 1: A new home
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The Gate-Way: Chapter 4 – A Lie Uncovered
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Halloween Bash
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Thieves (Chapter 2): Maneki's Capture
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Spyro: Release the Dragon (Scat version)
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Cumming of Age
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The Party
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Chapter Thirteen: It's Ricin
"it'll flow through her system faster and reach her heart sooner than we think," jacob answers for me, looking at me with critisicing eyes. "he's right, nate, you're not helping here, as much as you want to, you can't.
Wrong Bride, Right Groom - The Cabin - Locke's Story
\* \* \* =========================================================== well folks, there you have it, the second installment. i hope you all found it atleast intresting enough to reach this point and remember, all comments and critisisms will