Philadelphia. Or Not. (M/M)
Forgive any typos, grammar errors, repetitious words or the like. i didn't edit this? why? because that was part of the challenge! "oh, lance. c'mon, big bro. time to wake up."
VIP- Very Important Predator
As always, comments and critiques are welcomed, and please let me know if you find any embarrassing typos so i can fix them and hide my shame from future readers. thanks! arno cast his eye over the entryway as he walked into the resort.
Chapter 3 - Graduation
typo," she said. "what does that mean?" i asked. "it means that whoever typed this was not paying attention when they printed it. it says the same thing on mine and i just needed confirmation." usala tended to obsess over the smallest things.
Paying Miss Simon a visit
Mandatory apology for any typos, this story was not originally written in english.
The Dark Blog: Submitting a novel
We are willing to spend time correcting lots of typos and punctuation in a short story, but aren't as willing to do the same for a novel which might well be twenty times longer and take twenty times as much work.
Past Secrets: Chapter 2
Again, i don't have a lot to say other than there have been small changes to scenes and beware of typos/errors. "what was i thinking?" snowhawk asked herself as she walked through the city. "nyte's free and happy, and has been for four months now.
Past Secrets: Chapter 1
Also, beware of typos/errors. i'm trying to keep them to a minimum, but i make no guarantees. three thousand and fifty years ago, an empire of equine anthropomorphs (human-like equines) flourished. they were called the delphin.
The beast 4
Sorry for the typo and poor grammar, enjoy it if you can. :) most of it was typed in my mobile when i am free. rate the story if you wan, but plz..not the grammar.
David's Day Off (re-upload)
This is a re-upload of one of my favorite and most popular pieces. little typos have been all cleaned up thanks to spellcheck here. story and characters belong to me. illustration done courtesy of mr. dangerdoberman .
Gammia and Komyeta's third time.
Other than those two, some typo fixes, and the addition of some quotation marks, all of what follows is exactly how it was during the rp.
Melting down a snowflake (Illustrated)
Illustrations are done by alwayseversoawesome devoid-kiss also, this being a contest piece, if you find anything that feels off or a typo or something, please let me know with a comment ^^ characters (c) me proofreading by harrar swiftfang inspiration by
Dracius: Origins Part III
Edited for a few tense issues and typos. must have been tired when i uploaded it. comments and suggestions appreciated! lady el carefully guided me over to the log and tied another rope to my leg to shackle me to it.