Chapter 21: Marcus
Fox muted walter kent's editorial and answered the call on audio only, since both he and his wife were naked as they usually were in the privacy of their home. "hi fara. just give krystal and me a moment to make ourselves presentable."
A Means to an End
"spare me the editorials. are we doing this or not?" "fine." he hesitated. "what's wrong?" "this is so fucking weird." "come on. are you a man or not? i fucked your mum for fuck sake.
A New Direction
He was happy that he hadn’t truly cracked, though his editorializing at the end was a bit more ad-libbed and aggressive than he wanted to come off as.
Chapter 36: Aftermath
"it turns out that pricilla kane of the corneria enquirer wanted revenge for the negative editorials walter wrote regarding her and the tabloids.
Limando asperezas
Pero dice que ya bastante tiempo le quita la editorial. si lleva a abrirlo, creo que le pagaría a alguien para que se hiciera cargo de muchas cosas. -- ¿te molesta que no este contigo? --un poco. pero tampoco quiero estar todo el tiempo a su lado.
The Persistent Dragon: The Best-Laid Plans
Special editorial on page 2: "is hope memorial corrupt?" extra, extra: attempted robbery ends in triple homicide, two dragons spotted at the scene of the crime! coincidence or conspiracy? read the exclusive scoop in the north star gazette!"
Bee Stories
I shall mark the points-of-view of each character while supplying only minimal editorialization when necessary.
story: A Dragon in Equestria: Greldon & Twilight (w/m)
I know, this story would need some editorial work (english is not my native language), but i wanted to publish it now since i posted sucessfully the german version yesterday...
Against the Hordes of the Bitch Queen
Please enjoy chapter 14 of "against the hordes of the bitch queen" :) huge thanks to saga for letting me run amok with his characters, and also thanks for his great editorial advice.
Demiverse: Rural Life 4
Her eyes quickly left me and the studio box then fell back to the newspaper, the editorials section if i saw correctly.
Fantasmas del Pasado, primera parte
--la editorial de alfred es una de las mejores en europa. pero su jefa es bastante dura con quienes trabajan para ella. aunque no te la creas, alfred le tiene algo de pavor. -- ¡si no abres ahora mismo, tumbare esa puerta!
Shared Experience
The state of affairs, if i might be permitted to editorialize, is tragic." "more than that, it's ironic. the zel have starships, but their engines are subpar, at best."