The First day at Work
Please enjoy and comment, rate and/or critique. i really enjoy writing this. as i open the doors to my job, i look behind me and shake my head trying to shake this imaginary friend that has begun to follow me from my mind.
The Epitaph of A Living Man
I am displaying it here not for critique, not for ridicule, hell, not even for self-satisfaction. i am only displaying it here because it gives me a sort of 'settling' feeling of calm, being honest like this.
New Revelations
_note: no critiques, this is just for shits and giggles, nothing professional that's ever going to be published_ _prologue: [http://www.sofurry.com/view/496375](http://www.sofurry.com/view/496375)_ _chapter 2: [http://www.sofurry.com/view
In the World After: Chapter 4
As always, critique and comments are great, and don't be afraid of honest critique. if you notice any inconsistencies, just let me know, and me and maeve will get it worked out. david had been shot. jonathon, ben, and stephen had been killed.
A day in the life of a teenage pokemon Chapter 2 ((Rough draft, please critique))
Part 1: [http://sofurry.com/page/140425/user](http://sofurry.com/page/140425/user) Part 2 of a day in the life of a teenage pokemon The next day When Andrew woke up the next day, he logged onto his computer, and set up the memory...
A day in the life of a teenage pokemon Chapter 1 ((Rough draft, please critique))
Part 1 of a day in the life of a teenage pokemon Part 2: [http://sofurry.com/index.php?pid=140578](http://sofurry.com/index.php?pid=140578) Andrew was your semi-average 18 year old rich boy. He was still in high school, and had long since...
Authors - Ch 11 The Proposal
"a little critique is a good thing, though," crassius pointed out. "certainly, certainly! but tell me - and i'm not saying i'll change a thing - but if you were able to change one thing about my writing style, what would it be? and you too, quill.
The Loner, Chapter 1
With that in mind, don't hold back with your critiques, if you're inclined to give them. i want to improve, and i can't do that if people are softballing their reviews. thanks, -tr 'stand, even if you only stand alone.'
Depravity - Sail
Comments, critiques, and suggested tags always appreciated. i also love faves and ratings. i'm open for commissions! check my profile. if you consistently enjoy my work, consider becoming a backer on my patreon, or you can buy me a coffee on my ko-fi!
Rat's Reputation: Redwall, new and improved
It sounds like i'm making lots of critiques, but this is my internal editor at work. these are nitpicks in an otherwise great story. i give the book my hearty recommendation.
Garchomp wants, Garchomp gets
Any comments and critique and everything are well appreciated, thank you~ at 6'03", the blue dragoness clearly towers over myself.
The Raccoons: No Refusal - Epilogue
Ralph reminded the police that he did not have to talk to them, and that being the owner of a newspaper, he had no qualms whatsoever about publishing editorials critiquing what he saw as police misconduct.