Second sighting
I realise that college life is very dialogue heavy, and while at times i think that's necessary, there are other times when i think it's a sign that i need to improve the quality of my writing.
Unexpected Visit
Wrote this in more of a play scene style which means this story is more dialogue heavy and has less setup with short descriptions.
Rogue Wind - The Nobles
. \*\* \*\* \*\* \*\* \*\* \*\* \*\* \*\* \*\* \*\* another dialogue heavy chapter finished yay! i can't really think of much to say besides i found this story needed an arctic fox or two.
MHO - Cult of the Crimson Isles - Chapter 3
Pretty dialogue heavy, but i promise there's action on the horizon! please remember to leave a comment to share any thoughts you have about this chapter! i can only grow with feedback!
Indifferent Nature
This one came to be mainly because i wanted to try writin gsomething without dialogue, because i felt like my previous stories were a bit too dialogue heavy. not sure how well i did that, but anyway, this is what you get.
The Secret to Proper Paragraphing and Dialogue
Just for the record, i write extremely dialogue-heavy fiction. when i find that a dialogue tag is indeed needed in my story to identify who is talking, i see it as a red flag that indicates that all action has come to a screeching halt.
Don't Look Now
Yes, another dialogue heavy chapter, sorry. despite being a short journey, on the drive to wendy's house jake found himself unable to stop fidgeting. he was nervous, his limbs tight and heart racing.
Mystic Heart Odyssey - Chapter 12
A bit more dialogue heavy here, but should help shed some light on the land lykou and kuna have found themselves in- and the dangers that may lay ahead of them.
Downtime - Ch. 6 (MHO)
A lot more dialogue heavy this time, but hopefully you'll enjoy the banter... and a little bit of revelation~_ _-llox_ \_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\
Magnus Chronicles: Ancients Awakening: Chapter 5
This is definitely the most dialogue heavy chapter i have written so far. as always, i'm very appreciative of critiques and constructive feedback.
Journals of a Dark Elf Dancer: Chapter 5
As a result, this is a fairly dialogue heavy chapter. so to soften the blow, let's start off with some sex! ^\_^ critiques are welcome, as i am not entirely comfortable with dialogue.
Jayden, Chapter 3
#3 of the halfblood chapter three (duh) this is my first dialogue heavy chapter, so any tips there would be helpful...