this is my first story comments requested
comments and constructive criticism are strongly appreciated
I don't know, suggest a name in the comments
I guess this could be considered a prologue to a story I want to write Alexander woke in the morning it was a warm, calm morning and The sun shinned through the blinds, falling onto the white carpet. Alexander arose slowly, sitting up...
Cat Beard (work in progress comments welcome)
It started out like any other day. He was awoken by the sound of the waves lapping against his ship, the light flooding in like ribbons through the salt encrusted window into his luxurious cabin. The galleon was large and his quarters were...
From Foxy to Bunny: A (Sexy) Comment on Consumerism
Jaycie had seen the toy store whenever he walked the mall with his friends, but he never thought about going inside. It was full of children's things, like big stuffed animals and those stupid little games that weren't even fun as a kid. As he walked...
Clueless ch19: Terrousified
Between our laughter, it was enough to shift the mood to something less intense after all of sean's hateful comments.
Welcome Home II: Familiar Uncertainties
He occasionally tiled the camera down over his hard rat dick, smirking at the comments of 'nice dick', 'put the slut back on' and 'wish i was there to help' before centering the focus back onto his ram as he pathetically tried to cum.
a chance meeting at a club. plz leave comments as this is my first story :)
There he was dancing... adoreably I might add, Ive seen him before first at the store ,getting some redbull, then at the theater setting two rows in front of me. I couldn't help but notice him. he was a slender white rabbit about 6" tall so he wasn't...
Photo Booth
Jeremy paused when he noticed ashley's had a comment on her picture. out of curiosity, jeremy went to look at it. the comment read 'she looks so fat. how much does she weigh? 300 pounds?' jeremy rolled his eyes at the comment.
Invention of the Week Special: Fan Mail Edition!
For funsies i included her replying to comments that some people have left on past inventions of the week. this was a fun little diddy so if you have questions/want to see another one of these comment below! hello everyone!
Kept in Suspense
**personal comments** told wolf about the crazy customer i had to deal with today. hope i never have to see him again. wolf is a good listener.
Sylvester's Family Tales 31
They had comments on their profile. since they started it they hadn't had anything, so this was unprecedented. he quickly scrolled down, hiding the brothers' videos from view. he went down to the comments section.
Alcatraz-Character Bios V2
Allegiance: gra/global squadron 201 comments: janus.