High Tail High Chapter 8: New Choice
So, enjoy the revamp. it's not entirely new yet, so i'll erase this part when i'm satisfied it can get bigger...innuendo much.
shadow 1 (revamped version)
Shadow Prelude Shadow slept peacefully in the sunlight flowing through the open window of his room. The sheet had fell to the floor in the night revealing the muscular build of the jaguar lion mix. His black pelt of his fathers side was dotted...
Rise To Power Chapter 3
Your attack has caused me to revamp my security. no one will surprise me like you did again. see you later." flameria steps outside and heads for the shipyard. cole continued to clean for a half an hour to keep up apearances before stopping.
Extreme College Experience: When Two Worlds Collide
#3 of extreme college experiences this i did for an old college series on fa, but i feel it belongs here after i revamped it a little. you may notice the change in forms of writing.
Journey of the Chosen Chapter Twelve
# journey of the chosen this chapter has been revamped as of 10-23-2012. there will be no more changes to these chapters after i have revamped them.
Journey of the Chosen Chapter Six
# journey of the chosen i'm putting these notes up on all of my revamped work, which today's date is 09-30-12. there will be no more changes to this story after i have revamped them.
Transfurred 7
Even the most basic of shops like the snack stores had been revamped.
Forge of Heroes - Mania
All the slave mines are being revamped, with slaves from different mines building the walls. man'ahjit was the first one finished." "drysenn sent the siblings there to have the twins suffer an irony," the one falskin said.
Origins
Re-editing and revamping them slightly to feel more finished.
Shattered Freedom, Chapter Six
"they defiantly revamped the decor." vinnie replied winding his way through the corridors as if he knew where he was going. throttle merely followed, completely lost and turned around by the same patterns and blank gray doors they continuously past.
An Unconventional Arrangement
That's the price for a standard double-occupancy room - what single rooms we do have go for even more, and due to the revamped fire codes, we're not really allowed to squeeze in more than two to a standard room anymore.
Crushing The Competition #03: A Good Start to a Bad Night
This is a "revamp" of the current serial for the jackalope serial company.