Moon Light
Comments and critique welcome at: [[email protected]](/cdn-cgi/l/email-protection)
A time before ours.
I don't mind critique if i get it, but if i get a few likes then ill start doing more poems ^_^ thanks guys<3 poem the cold rain from the clouds brought down upon that dismal day, the lambs that fed upon that ground have all but ran away, the trees that grew
To The Blue
As always, critique is appreciated!
Avery’s Awakening
Please feel welcome to critique this as harshly as you feel compelled to. i'm no flake, and i'm always looking to improve my writing.
Morsel
This poem is a vignette that features the exploits of an overeating food critiquing pig and a chance encounter with a tailor rooster.
Fragments; Dthana T'Kaltyae Saga
I'm hoping i have no problem with sex or depraved scenes either perhaps one of you will give me a good synopsis critique upon my latest effort?!
A woman's story - A Panda's tale
critique always welcome! chapter 1: a panda's integrity "he's a lazy little shit!"
The Myrakkari Chronicles (v.1.0) Chapter One
#1 of story drafts - for sf member critique this is the first draft of the first chapter in my story series that i am writing. this is a critique piece only, and not the final draft! feel free to comment, or offer suggestions.
Biological Warfare: Chapter 1 - "If This Works"
Any critiques are greatly appreciated. thanks, everyone! a thursday writing prompt story, multi-part. i wrote this for thursday writing prompt on furaffinity.
Of a Time Before
I am always open to critique as long as it is constructive. if you don't play nice, you won't be invited to my tea party. i hope you enjoy.
Disclaimer
I would be grateful for suggestions and critique, as long as they are constructive. and to repeat myself: i know i have taken lots of artistic freedoms with the lore... so to all you hardcore tabletop warriors... please, just have fun...
Ballad of the Otter War
critique is appreciated!