Finding Atlantis - Ch6
I don't think i really like the way it turned out, but i am fed up with re-writing it, so here it is. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Snake Lords of the Desert 28
Completely re-writing someone so that they were obedient and still keeping their mind intact was a draining process, and not one that he would like to do so often as he was probably going to need to. but that was the issue of ruling an empire.
Ch. 1. Beginings
I plan on re-writing this story over and over again to get it perfect. this is just my rough draft. what do you think?
TS: Chapter 4
#5 of the spies: story candidate for a re-write. -4- i touched down in the cemetery at 6:25 p.m. "this it?" i asked. "yeah," answered sparktrivis.
Game Over: Bowser's Final Victory (over Peach)
If anyone likes this one, i am planning on re-writing the same plotline (with the same outcome ;) ) from peach's point of view. hope you enjoy!
Changes (BETA)
Thinking of re-writing to just make it "journal format". need opinions, critique, feedback in general. oh, works best in fixed width due to the crazy formatting from the software i was using.
Unless, Part Three
"so we re-write the rule again," jim said, "maybe we were a bit hasty in the wording, it _was_ the first time we ever thought to change it, after all..."
Saga of the Secretary 2: Changing Bodies
How difficult was it to re-write bits of her mind?" "surprisingly easy, particularly around the libido boosting parts. we barely had to do anything on that." "...what?"
A Life in Chains: Chapter Twelve
40 pages, countless re writes and re edits, re posts, tweeks and changes. i guess thats writing for you, though i couldnt have done it without the help and suport of a few close friends, namely my bestie kai sorrelclaw, and my boyfriend jantra. as well as
Worshipping the Stud (alternate version)
An absolute pleasure to write and challenging with re-writing to include they/them. hope you guys will enjoy both versions and please be respectful of both commissioners and characters in this instance!
Worshipping the Stud
An absolute pleasure to write and challenging with re-writing to include they/them (which will be uploaded come sunday). hope you guys will enjoy both versions and please be respectful of both commissioners and characters in this instance!
In-Between Ch. 3
Had various modifications to do to this chapter...as well as a small re-write of the original idea. the chapter may be short, but that's how i intended to keep it as it was only meant to present axel's dream.