The Relliard Mansion ---- part one
As usual, please leave feedback on this story so that i can do a better job on part two the original story had 669 words, and my rewrite has 1817 words.
Chapter 1: A New School
(joker laughs) can't stop me from rewriting it. anyway, if you ever read boating turtle's "surviving the harem life!", it's kind of similar.
(Name Needed): Chapter 1
We had hoped to sell specialized injections to rewrite their genes to make them more like an animal of their choice. there would, of course, be safety precautions in place as per the proper administration of this virus."
Chapter Nine
"now i want you to rewrite your introductory paragraph while also getting rid of the words on this list, and also get on dictionary.com and use the thesaurus to get rid of these baby words."
Red Moon: Chapter 12
Not all of the flesh was red and engorged in bloody, some of it had begun to take that sick grey color as the werewolf took over, rewriting dna, rewriting everything.
Wolves of Hope: Freedom Trails
I promise to try my best to rewrite it. please rate and comment!
No Work For Today
Anakani had just finished the rewrite for the first scene, along with updated dialogue and such.
The Long Gift—Chapter 4
"yeah, i wrote a three-page paper on why i thought i shouldn't have to rewrite my paper.
Icebound - A Word From The Author
We took a good four months going through the first five chapters, and i had to rewrite them several times. now, we usually only get through about one chapter a week. i hope to finish it sometime in the next three months.
Third Arc Crimson Moon: Chapter 4
Well because it was a rewrite anyway, there were a _lot_ of things not in the book.
Ghostbin
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Snippet: Chapter II - A Dragon's Rampage
#3 of wolf/dragon: rewrite snippet: a piece of a whole. this may vary in size of object, subject, illustration, animation of just plain text. well, this is a snippet of chapter ii.