If You Try Hard Enough
My first commission, for an old friend of mine. Zelos finds himself banished to a familiar world where humans capture monsters and make them fight each other, although the Luxray he ends up facing has other ideas...
If You Try Hard Enough
By Joshua “Kyrien” Cranston
Commission for Miles Zelos
With a sharp crack, an irregularly-shaped violet tear appeared like an angry, open wound in the air itself, and half a dozen small heads popped up out of the tall grass carpeting the prairie. Almost immediately, a massively broad black footpaw shot through the opening, flailing in the air, and a mass of black and white fur clogged the opening… but a moment later, the portal strained and swelled dangerously, as if giving birth, and the foot’s owner was ejected forcefully onto the ground with a loud thud and a cloud of grass and dust that sent the indigenous creatures scurrying off for safety.
Hurling himself to his feet, Zelos charged back toward the opening, but it collapsed into a glittering line and vanished just before he got there. “Oh cuss!” Snarling, he brushed leaves out of his fur and looked around.
The grass spread out toward the horizon in most directions around him, occasionally dotted with small trees of various types he didn’t recognize. Squinting, the colorless monster noticed the walls of some kind of city in the extreme distance, but… that was going to be one hell of a trek. Behind him, the tree cover thickened substantially, quickly transforming into a forest of far more impressive growths. And there were beasts of at least a dozen types he didn’t recognize ambling about; the larger ones seemed utterly unconcerned by his sudden arrival, but the sporadic rustling of the grass suggested that quite a few smaller types also called the prairie home.
Massively oversized paws on his hips, Zelos snorted a hot breath of annoyance through his ridged snout. “Bloody wizards. Am I even still on the same planet?” Shielding his eyes with one dark paw, he peered around again for more attainable signs of civilization, all unaware that his appearance had drawn the eyes of more than beasts…
Victor sat with his back to a large tree, tapping at his Pokedex in frantic delight. The very first day of his safari, and he’d already found a Pokemon that no one had seen before! And an Uplift, at that! Wild Uplifted Pokemon were unheard of, considering that Uplift Stones were a recent invention, and unstable outside of a controlled lab environment! He studied the image his device had generated for the creature. It had vague similarities with some kind of huge, mutant Thievul or Delphox. White fur over most of its body, with black on the lower halves of its limbs, the tip of its tail, ears, and its mane of human-like hair. Not to mention its… well, his absolutely massive dick, draped over his equally prodigious white balls. He glanced at the ‘male’ symbol that was one of the few things his ‘dex had filled in. No shit, Sherlock! The screen also listed the creature as Poison type, which surprised him somewhat, and was giving its egg group as a tossup between Field and Ditto of all things, which flooded his mind with ideas…
“If only I’d brought Rhydon with me,” the thirty year old trainer muttered to himself. “Oh well, it’s fine. There’s not much that my partner can’t handle!” Grabbing a black Pokeball ringed with red and gold accents from his belt, he tapped its button to enlarge it to its full softball size, climbed to his feet, and stepped out from behind the tree, breaking into a run.
One of Zelos’s ears twitched, canting backward, and he turned in place on his broad, lumbering legs. “Oh, a human! Hey, can you tell me…” He fell silent, frowning around his massive fangs, as it became apparent that whoever it was was running at him rather than to him. A moment later, his unknown assailant skidded to a stop, with a dark object - some kind of bomb? - held back to throw.
Trainer Victor wants to fight!
“Luxray! I choose you!”
Victor hurled the sphere in Zelos’s direction, and the monochromatic monster raised a massive paw to shield his face… but the orb stopped halfway, hovering in the air as it cracked open and disgorged an arc of blue-white energy onto the ground several feet away from him, before flying back to the trainer’s hand.
As the blast of light where the bolt had struck faded, it revealed a leonine creature curled up on the ground, its star-tufted tailtip twitching slightly in annoyance at having been bothered during its all-important fifth nap of the day. Zelos looked between it and the human in bemusement. “Sorry, is this some kind of greeting ritual?”
Victor’s face paled. Not again! “Luxray, this is no time to be sleeping! We have a wild Pokemon to catch!”
Zelos lifted one eyebrow, his frown returning. “Pokey what? Look, I don’t know what kind of racket you’re running here, but I’m not a wild animal.”
The human looked uncertain for a second, then shook his head. “Look, I get that you’re uplifted - somehow - but that doesn’t change the fact that you’re obviously a Pokemon. It’s short for ‘pocket monster.’ Don’t worry, I’ll tell you all about it once I capture you!”
The shaggy black and white creature snorted and folded his big arms across his chest. “You and what army? If you want a piece of me, come over here yourself, coward. You’re not shoving me into one of those stupid balls.”
Finally accepting it was not going to be allowed enough peace and quiet to rest, Luxray stretched out its forelegs and yawned expansively. “Don’t knock it until you’ve trrried it. Mine is rrreally comforrrtable… when Masterrr doesn’t kick me out of it.” Uncurling itself, the creature rose onto its hindlegs, finally opening its golden eyes. “Alrrright, let’s get this overrr with.”
The beast bore some resemblance to an anthrolion, but with numerous exceptions. Black over much of its powerful body, it had a section of blue below the mantle of dark ‘spikes’ of fur across its shoulders and upper back, as well as on its hindlegs, huge circular ears and much of its face, and blue and gold stripes on the inside of its arm-like forelegs, which just drew attention to its ample biceps. A spiky black ‘mane’ covered the back of its head, with similarly angular tufts flaring from the black fur of its hindquarters and forepaws. It stood upright, but… imperfectly, as if it would still be more at home on all four paws, and its dark tail was tipped with a four-pointed golden star. But none of that was what really captured Zelos’s attention.
Hanging between his legs was an absolutely massive pair of blue-furred nuts, underneath a wrist-thick sheath in the same color that already had the angular tip of the creature’s black penis poking out of it. The colorless monster had the brief, incongruous thought that there were at least a couple of balls in play here that did interest him, but snapped out of it when the human spoke up again.
“Luxray, use Thunder Wave!”
The cat-beast hunched forward as electricity arced between the spikes in his fur, and Zelos held up his arms to protect himself… but then blinked as the lion just emitted a stream of golden ripples through the air, which spread out into a dome around the fangy monster’s body. He felt his fur stand up as a faint tingle passed through him, then laughed. “Was that supposed to huuurgh!” Without warning, a powerful convulsion ripped through his body, and the next thing he knew he was face-down in the dirt and twitching.
“Good work! Now use Thunderbolt! …Luxray? Use Thunderbolt!”
As the spasms subsided for a moment, Zelos struggled to pick himself up off the ground, and looked up to see the lion-creature gazing down at him, his eyes glowing brightly gold in a face that suddenly looked a lot less sleepy, and a lot more surprised. Ignoring his trainer’s command, Luxray sniffed at the air, then lashed his tail twice. “You’rrre a female!”
“What are you talking about, Luxray? It’s obviously male… and that doesn’t matter! Attack before it gets away!”
“Masterrr, shut yourrr face.”
The trainer recoiled in shock. Luxray’s Uplifted intelligence made him hard to control, but that was the first time the Pokemon had ever talked back to him so directly!
Striding closer, Luxray hunched down in front of Zelos. “It’s not my fault yourrr eyes can only see the surrrface of things. Besides, you have dozens of pets, Masterrr. This one… is mine.” Grabbing Zelos with both nearly-feral paws in his - no, her - long, black mane, the hulking creature rubbed his cantaloupe-sized balls against her nose and against the ridged bridge of her snout. As the lion-pokemon’s virile musk filled her airways, Zelos felt her mind becoming as electrified and unreliable as her body. Her cock started stiffening rapidly under her twitching body, and the scent of her heat began to fill the air as her pussy slickened; smelling it, Luxray growled, and his massive black penis rapidly erupted from its sheath, rows upon rows of back-facing, fleshy nubs popping free of confinement.
Luxray used Swagger! It’s super effective!
Capitalizing on Zelos’s dazed indecision, Luxray rose from his crouch and lumbered around behind her, sinking onto his knees over her thick legs and bracing his paws against her back. “I haven’t gotten to brrreed since Masterrr awakened me. I’m going to put so many eggs in yourrr belly…”
Zelos shook her head, trying her best to rally. “Oh cuss… don’t even know where I am and…” The lion beast rubbed his fat, barbed cock up under her fluffy tail, and she felt it lifting and shifting aside without any conscious intention from her, baring the soft-lipped slit at its base that she normally kept hidden behind her massive balls. “Nnf… f-fine, just… be gentle, alright?”
The big, muscular Poke-man leaned further over her, moving his paws to her shoulders and firmly shoving her front end down against the ground, grinning fiercely. “No.” With no further preamble, he pulled his hips back, lowered his chest to line himself up, and roughly forced his barbed cock into her black-lipped pussy, letting out a yowl of bliss!
Zelos’s lips drew back, and her eyes slammed shut as she struggled not to give the creature the satisfaction of hearing her cry out. God, he was as hung as she was! He immediately dug his sharp claws into her thick pelt and started rutting her like an animal, his massive black bitchbreaker stretching her pussy wide and raking her from cervix to vulva with those firm nubs. Not sharp enough to do any damage, they still dug into the soft, slickened walls of her vagina with each withdrawal, turning her womb to jelly and making her ovaries tingle hotly with their unrelenting overstimulation.
Hissing, she felt her higher brain functions trying to abandon her, and began to struggle again. When Luxray just shoved her huge-fanged face down into the dirt once more, she cupped one massive paw upward, and a mass of blueish slime formed in the grass around her, extruding a large, dripping arm of coherent goo that unsteadily reached back to grab the lion mounting her. But before it could get there, she heard the human’s voice again.
“Luxray, use Electro Ball!”
Zelos yelped as she felt Luxray’s massive sack crackle with electricity as it rubbed against the back of her own, and the shock caused her to lose her concentration, the ooze-limb decohering and splashing back down into the grass. Impossibly, she felt Luxray’s testicles and penis swelling even larger against and within her, and now each of those barbs was serving as a low-voltage cattle prod, causing the muscles of her core, from abs to pussy, to twitch and convulse uncontrollably. It felt like she was already in orgasm, and the sensation drove her ever closer to making that a reality, as her cock gushed precum into the crushed grass beneath her.
“Rrrrh… that’s a good egg-bitch, just take yourrr stud deep in you…” Getting more frenzied by the moment, Luxray hammered the battering ram of his penis against the shaggy monster’s cervix, struggling to wedge its tip through the spongy opening and into her womb. “You arrre mine, to mount and fuck and fill!”
It was all too much. Confused, half-paralyzed and wracked with bliss, Zelos felt her head spinning, and the remaining vestiges of her self-control fell away completely. Her fangy maw opened, but all that came out was a deep, unsteady moan, as she held onto the turf for dear life and just endured. She felt her body’s inmost barrier inexorably giving way under the relentless assault, and then suddenly, the cat-stud drove himself in to the hilt, his barbed penis forcing itself through her cervix and pressing its tip into the soft, cushiony walls of her womb. Zelos’s eyes rolled back, and her moan rose into a scream, as her pussy clenched down hard and started milking Luxray’s cock for the life-giving seed it desperately craved, and her cock pulsed hard against her belly, spilling a torrent of white monster cum into the mess of blue goo under and around her, coating her front in bicolored slime.
Luxray’s back arched, and his mouth fell open, fangs gleaming in the sunlight as his body started to tense up hard. His balls quivered, churning and swelling further as months of unsatisfied needs rose to a crescendo…
“Luxray, use Discharge!”
Letting out a savage roar, the leonine Pokemon complied, and Zelos felt firehose-like jets of hot Luxray semen erupting directly into her fertile hollow, flooding it in seconds and forcing the thick, potent cat-seed up toward her ovaries. The two of them stayed there like that, locked together, spasming in savage egg-making rapture, for several seconds that felt like an eternity… and then he went right back to fucking her again, his barbs raking soft gushes of semen out to flow over both of their balls as his half-feral body flexed frantically against her.
“W-wait… stop, I can’t take…!”
Again the beast roared, and again he seeded her, panting and yowling as his twitching cock forced another heavy load up into her belly.
And again.
And again.
Finally, after his fifth orgasm - and Zelos’s third - Luxray was satisfied, and dropped his considerable weight onto his bitch’s back. “Ahhh… so much betterrr…” With a big, dopey smile, he closed his eyes, letting his tongue poke out between his fangs, and promptly went right back to sleep on top of her, without even pulling out.
Victor wiped his forehead, doing his best to ignore the erection straining against the inside of his pants from the protracted carnal display. “That… wasn’t what I had in mind, but a win’s a win, I guess. Luxray, return!” He held out the pokeball, and energy arced from it again; a moment later, the weight pinning Zelos to the ground was gone, and she started trying to pull herself out of the sloppy fuck-mess the two of them had made. Her limbs felt numb and rubbery from all of the electricity and brutal sex, though, and she slipped right back down into it, just coating herself even worse.
“Don’t worry, we’ll get you cleaned up in a little bit.” Zelos struggled to lift her head again, just in time to see the human reach back with another black, red and gold Pokeball… and throw it. A moment later, everything briefly went white.
Suddenly, Zelos found herself in a large, nest-like bed, complete with pillows, blankets and a fan. The urge to just give in and sleep was overpowering, but with the last of her strength, she forced herself to kick out against the apparent front of her prison with one big foot.
Biting his lip, Victor watched as the Pokeball bounced and rocked. Once… twice… three times…
Click!
The trainer jumped up, thrusting one arm into the air, and hooted in triumph. The moment he landed, he ran over and picked up the Luxury Ball, planting a smooch on its smooth surface.
“Oh man, I’m gonna be famous! I’m not sure what you really are, but… I guess I’ll find out when I get you home. After all…”
He clicked the button, shrinking the ball down to travel size, and slipped it into a pocket.
“...anything can be a Pokemon, if you try hard enough!”
Later, at the Pokemon Day Care…
Luxray licked encouragingly at Zelos’s muzzle as the supine monster gritted her teeth and pushed. A large, smooth egg slid into place against the inside of her vulva, stretching it dangerously as it started to emerge.
“Harrrderrr, Zelos! You’rrre almost therrre!”
Hissing around her fangs, the monochromatic monster lifted her shoulders and strained… and then gasped as the egg slipped free, rolling against the three others she had already laid. Collapsing down onto her back, she panted hard, struggling to catch her breath, and rested a big paw on her belly. Finally flat again…
A moment later, another human peeked in through a slot in the wall of the stable-like nesting room the two monsters occupied. “All done in there? Good.” The slot closed, and a few seconds later, the door opened, as the caretaker loaded the eggs into the wheelbarrow he had waiting. “Phew, you two have really been going at it! Keep ‘em coming!” Whistling to himself, he closed the door again, wheeling away their unhatched progeny to await their trainer’s return.
Luxray lashed his tail, grinning. “My pleasurrre!” Zelos started to close her legs defensively as the big beast climbed over her belly, but then felt a thrill as he rubbed his hard, fat lion-dick against her, and relented, spreading them and welcoming him in.
“Y’know, you don’t have to work for that human.”
Luxray paused at that, looking confused. “I don’t?”
“Heck no. What’s he gonna do, throw more balls at you? You should ditch him and help me figure out how to get home.”
The lion-beast appeared to ponder that alien concept for a few moments, then smiled. “Let me brrreed you a couple dozen morrre times, and I’ll think about it.”
Reaching up, Zelos guided her leonine stud down into her body, wrapping all four stocky limbs around him as he rutted her chest to chest for a change, and the shared rapture started to build in them again. There were definitely worse ways to earn her chance at an escape plan!