Divine Intervention
After a devastating loss while on vacation in China, a young man named Zayn finds comfort and more in his savior...
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Zayn Chen, a Chinese-American young man, and his grandfather Benjamin lay in their beds in a hotel room in the city of Lijiang, the moon and stars visible through open window curtains. The shadow of Jade Dragon Snow Mountain lay over the city like a dark blanket.
“Zayn," said Ben, his hair and goatee grayed with age. “We're going up to the mountain tomorrow morning. We should get some rest."
“Why should I when I don't even want to be here?" said Zayn sulkily.
“I brought you here to see the place your ancestors came from hundreds of years ago." said Ben.
“Well, what if I don't care about my ancestors?" Ben looked taken aback, shock on his face.
“Even me?" he asked gravely.
“As of right now," said Zayn, turning and laying his head on his pillow. “Yes. Good night." His heart in shatters, Ben looked at his grandson and sighed, hoping that he would understand the importance of their trip sooner than later.
Zayn didn't like being dragged all the way to China, and he liked being woken up early even less. He and Ben walked through the streets of Lijiang up to a cable car station that brought people up the mountain. Ben looked at Zayn, and he looked back. The elderly man waited for Zayn to possibly say something positive. He'd take anything. But in that moment, an earthquake struck.
“Grampa," asked Zayn as fear overtook him. “What's happening?"
“I don't know, Zayn," said Ben calmly. “Just calm down, there's nothing to-" He was interrupted when the mountain itself began to crack, the sounds of splitting earth echoing across the land. From within the mountain burst forth the head and neck of a gigantic black serpent, easily thirty feet minimum. Blood red eyes burned with malice, fangs dripped corrosive venom, a spike-edged hood spread wide. The serpent let loose an ear-shattering roar, as if challenging heaven itself.
“Run," said Ben. “Run!" Grandfather and grandson, along with anyone with common sense, ran in the opposite direction of the serpent, which heard their screams and slithered out and down the mountain, crushing and snapping up anyone unfortunate to be in its path. Its whole body was at least a hundred feet long and twenty feet thick. Ben looked behind him, seeing the serpent's open maw racing towards him. In an instant, he shoved Zayn forwards. The young man fell to the ground, hitting his head on a decorative statue.
Dazed, Zayn looked behind him to see if his grandfather was still behind him. Instead, he saw only the black serpent, licking its lips as it swallowed, eyes the size of spotlights staring right at him. It lunged, intending to devour Zayn as it did his grandfather, but it was sideswiped by another giant snake. This one was a third bigger and resembled a python with pure white scales and bright blue eyes. The black serpent screeched in pain, the white one's fangs digging deep into its neck. They coiled around each other and thrashed about, crushing the city in the process. The black one tried in vain to snap at its assailant, until with a violent jerk, the white serpent put an end to its malevolent acts. It dropped the black serpent, falling dead to the ground with a snapped neck. Zayn's vision vaded, his head throbbing. He saw the white serpent slither towards him, then darkness consumed him…
Zayn opened his eyes, his mind hazy. He sat up, looking around and taking in his strange new surroundings. He was in a vast cave, with him upon a raised plateau many tens of feet above the cave floor. Moonlight shone in from a large hole in the ceiling. He tried to remember what had happened. The giant black serpent, his grandfather pushing him, himself hitting his head…
“No," whispered Zayn as realization set in. “Grampa…" Tears began to stream from his eyes as he knew he was never going to see his grandfather again. The man who raised him from when he was a small child. And how did he repay him? With disrespect and no apology. He broke down in a fit of silent weeping, clutching his knees and crying into his arms.
“I'm sorry." came a female voice, soothing and maternal, as it seemed to come from under and around him. Zayn looked up to see the head of the white serpent rise from the edge of the plateau in a circle until it faced him.
“You," said Zayn, wiping his eyes and standing up. “You saved me."
“Call it a habit." said the white serpent with the equivalent of a shrug.
“Who or what are you, anyway?" asked Zayn.
“My name is Bai-She, and I am a Serpent of Tian. Millennia ago, the intestines of Nüwa, the mother goddess, were spilled. Those intestines became ten serpent gods and goddesses, five of Tian, or Heaven, five of Diyu, or Hell. We waged war with each other for eons until me and Hei-She were the last of us. And now, I'm the last of my kind."
“But aren't you immortal?" asked Zayd.
“Being a goddess, yes, but as you saw, we are still able to be killed by divine or near-divine means."
“So what will you do?"
“Oh, probably just continue to help those in need. Though it's going to be a lonely existence."
“One I'm about to become all too familiar with." said Zayn, once again sitting down and sulking.
“What do you mean?" asked Bai-She.
“In a manner of speaking," said Zayn. “I guess you could say I'm the last of my kind too. My parents died in a car crash when I was very young, so my grandfather took me in. About two days ago he brought me here to learn more about my heritage, but I didn't want to. It was stupid of me to act so childish, and… and…" Zayn closed his eyes and began to cry again. “I didn't even get a chance to apologize." He suddenly felt something smooth and warm caress his shoulders up to the side of his head. He looked up to see Bai-She, but his size, if slightly bigger, coiled up in front of him and touching her tail on his body.
“How'd you do that?" he asked.
“I'm a goddess, remember?" said Bai-She. “I can change my size and my shape at a whim. You poor thing. What's your name?"
“Zayn."
“Well, Zayn," said Bai-She, slithering off the plateau and returning back to her original size. “I think I know a way to lift both our spirits and solve our endling problems at the same time."
“And what would that be?" asked Zayn.
“Well," said Bai-She in a slightly hesitant manner. “You see, endlings are the last of a species. In most cases, said species is already extinct. But if you combine divine and mortal…"
“Let me stop you right there," said Zayn, raising a finger. “You mean to tell me… that you want us to have sex?"
“If you want to put it bluntly, yes. Unless you don't want to, that is."
“No, no," said Zayn. “I actually do."
“Really?" said Bai-She, her features brightening.
“If it'll help us, why not? It's not like I have anything to go back to now. But… any chance you could turn into something more… my speed?"
“Not a problem."
Bai-She shrank and shifted her form until it resembled something a bit more human-like as Zayd removed his clothing. She still retained her snakeish features, but from the waist up she had a scale-covered human-like body, with arms and a pair of perfect breasts, which kickstarted Zayn's arousal. From the waist down was a twenty-foot snake tail. And in the center of her waist was a glistening human-like vagina.
“Come here." said Bai-She sensually, arms extended. Zayd walked forward to meet with her, but he suddenly found himself tightly hugging the snout of Bai-She's giant snake form, his penis poking above her upper lip.
“Uh, Bai-She," he said. “What gives?" Bai-She chuckled at his confusion.
“You need to be punished for disrespecting your elders. Now lay down, please."
Zayn did as he was told, Bai-She's giant head hovering above his erect cock. She took a tiny tentative lick, earning a moan of pleasure from Zayn's lips. Gently, she took his penis into her mouth, the tip only just passing her scaly lips. She then began to bob her head in comparatively small movements. But judging by how Zayd reacted, they were absolutely euphoric. Bai-Shen chuckled and moaned, intensifying the young man's pleasure.
“My God, Bai-She," said Zayd. “You're incredible at this." The great serpent released his member with a lick of her lips.
“Why thank you, Zayd. But don't think that's getting you out of my grasp just yet." She took her forked tongue and curled one of the tines around Zayn's shaft and giving a few strokes before leaving it.
She then slithered her back half onto the plateau, her manhole-sized pussy on full display for Zayn.
“Go ahead," said Bai-She. “Do as you wish." Zayn didn't need to be told twice. He approached the massive pussy, thinking about how to service it. He started by giving a few tentative licks of his own, her nectar tasting like that of the gods. Bai-She's response came in the form of a small moan.
“Keep going, but you're going to need to be more creative." she said. Zayn thought some more until another idea popped into his head. Balling his hand into a fist, he thrust the whole of his arm into Bai-She's walls. The serpent let out an especially loud moan as her body shook, Zayn struggling to keep with her movements.
“Oh, yes. By Nüwa, that felt amazing. Do it again." Zayn pulled his arm back, slick with her juices, and shoved it back in as another moan shook her. In and out his arm went, occasionally rubbing the insides of her walls with his fingers.
“Okay, okay," gasped Bai-She. “Stop."
“Are you ready?" asked Zayn.
“Yes." said Bai-She as Zayn pulled his arm out one last time.
The goddess turned back into her human-sized naga form and slithered over to Zayn, embracing him in a powerful hug as she kissed the human deeply. They both moaned into it, tongues twisting around each other and forced into opposite mouths. Zayn returned the hug, loving the feel of her soft scales on his skin. Bai-She broke the kiss, a strand of saliva still connecting their lips for a moment.
“Zayn," she said sweetly, looking into his eyes. “I want to bear your children. I want both of our bloodlines to live on for countless generations. Please." She slowly reclined until she was on her back, Zayn on top of her.
“Don't worry," said Zayn, taking Bai-She's hands in his own and lining his hips up with hers. “I'll give you… us, a new lineage."
And with that, he slowly entered the goddess' depths, the two of them moaning softly. Zayn began to thrust in and out of her at a slow and steady pace, their grip on each other's fingers tightening with pleasure. They both were in heaven, neither having experienced this kind of bliss before. Their bodies and minds became lost in the blissful feeling as Zayn began to speed up, their moans increasing in frequency and volume. Bai-She clasped her arms tightly around Zayn's shoulders, pulling herself upwards to kiss him deeply once more. She thrusted her own hips to meet Zayn's, pushing his member even deeper inside her. Moaning through interlocked lips, they both hit their peaks simultaneously, Zayn thrusting as deep as he could and shooting his semen into Bai-She's womb. The goddess' own cum exploded outwards, drenching their hips in nectar.
The deed done, they finally relaxed, panting and basking in heavenly afterglow.
“Bai-She," said Zayn, rubbing her shoulders. “I love you." Bai-She responded with a heart-melting smile and a quick kiss.
“I love you too," she said, stroking the human's back. “We did it. We're no longer the last of our kinds."
“Too bad I won't live as long as either you or our children." said Zayn in a pessimistic manner.
“Oh, don't worry. Whenever a mortal meets with a divine being in love, their mortality is stripped away. You are just as immortal as me, now."
“Thank you," said Zayn, laying down into Bai-She's breasts. “So any ideas for names?" The goddess chuckled warmly as she coiled her tail around her lover, enveloping them both in warmth.
“We can talk about it in the morning." she said, the both of them falling into a deep and contented sleep soon after.