Rainfall - Chapter 01
.: this is my first draft, any suggestions, insights, and critiques would be very much appreciated.
The Missing Son, Chapter 10
The brothers go visit patrick to tell him the good news. things don't go as they expected it the is a first draft of what is the first orr family chronicles novel on the schedule for publication (no dates yet, probably a few years away) it is the first book
The Anger Poem
But nevertheless, enjoy my first draft of the anger poem. ohhhh so angry. your comments and likes are most valuable! :) thank you! p.s: yes, poetry slam in our school next friday. but i have stage fright! oh, volcanoes.
Wasteful Death, CH 06
This is the first draft version of the story.
The Beaten Path
There...heres the improved version, i decided that the first draft which i wrote ages ago wasn't good enugh, so i've started to rewrite the whole thing.
Wasteful Death, CH 02
This is the first draft version of the story.
The Missing Son, Chapter 40
This is a first draft of what is the first orr family chronicles novel on the schedule for publication (no dates yet, probably a few years away) it is the first book planned in a trilogy.
Roommates Aside 1: Settling for More
So, basically, this should tide all of you over until chapters seven (in the process of being revised at the time of this writing) and eight (in the process of being created for a first draft) are completed. enjoy, one and all.
The Odd Couple
A first draft of my new story. it's a different version of the story that lunatic phantasm started for me. it's actually kinda close to how my mate and i really met and whatnot.
Wasteful Death, CH 03
This is the first draft version of the story.
A Stable Job Pt.1
I got another big story that's done its first draft and needs a lot of editing still, so i submitted this first part in the meantime our protaganist ben is desperate for work, he almost gives up hope finding one when he suddenly spots a farm he never saw before
Life is Just a Storm- Chapter 25- Absence
first drafts are meant to be shitty. first drafts are meant to be shitty. say it with me now. "first drafts are meant to be shitty." (oh my god, why am i not perfect??) here is chapter 25. more or less. 4,163 words. twenty-five.