Tales of the Huntsville Mayors - Prologue
Fifty years later, no one remembers the critics. the journey hasn't always been smooth, though.
Hope
Note that this is just an experiment of mine and my first time doing such a thing, so if you have any constructive criticism then please post it to me in pm :) thank you!! _well hello.... it appears you've stumbled into the wrong place, or well....
The Little Grown Up Part II
Blah part ii is done hope you liked it criticism is welcomed :d!
Unexpected Love - Chapter 1 - They Meet
Well there you go that's chapter 1, this is my first story, so people please comment, could use some constructive criticism or anything.
Heat Games II: Sweeps - Prologue
One of the main criticism of his show was that it turned something natural, even_ holy_, like the creation of new life in kurtulmak's image, and turned it into some sort of tawdry entertainment. he wished his critics could see him now.
Pathfinding: An Adult Choose Your Own Adventure, Twenty-Eighth Entry
After the critical failure, each character then had a 50% chance of being safe (1-50), a 25% chance of being captured (51-75), and a 25% chance of being badly injured (76-100).
Introduction to 'The Student'
They are criticized, prosecuted, and even attacked by extremist religious, scientific, and political groups claiming that such 'abominations' should not be allowed to exist for fear that they may endanger humanity due to their brutal animalistic nature.
Catch of the Day
Cidnie watched with a critical eye, not moving a muscle while the tiger worked. at least, not until aldrin began slipping the towel into his genital slit. at that point he felt the first stirrings of arousal.
Daddy takes care of me (M/M)
* * * constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated . this is my first story and i'm hoping to maybe write more in the future let me know what you think :3
Third Arc Crimson Moon: Epilogue
Just a few critics who were a little harsh on rob but nothing to cry over." "good..." alexiel reached into his coat and pulled out several documents.
Into the Horizon: Power Contested Part 3
This one was the sub-light's going critical. dasher heard the door open and realized that he was helpless to do anything to save himself. he still didn't have his vision.
Unexpected Love Part 3
My "childhood" was just me running from the critics. i learned to hide my pain behind a fake smile. then ... i met denis. he was always positive. he cared about me. he suported me. we used to play together only and around him i was myself.