Reaping the Rewards
A project i'm working with to increase description and imagery while keeping the piece short and simple. not too bad, imo, kell and ammy could have used more description though.
Lovers from the Battlefield
At that point kris, bursted into laughter at the mental imagery. it took her a while to gather herself before she replied. "that explains why your face was bright red." she said giggling. "don't remind me my ass hurt after she pinched it."
THE PERKS OF BEING THE DRAGONBORN’S FOLLOWER
Derkeethus groaned and had to bite his hand to stop himself from just dropping his pants and jerking off right there at the mental imagery swarming through his head.
Access Violation
The connector - a pink, fleshy appendage unfurled from his upper port only to jam itself into her own upper port, in a mock imagery of a kiss. 9246's artificial mind tingled with sensations as the connection was established, and he started lacing the insides
Crocs Blood Chapter 3- Another
She probably shouldn't masturbate with an egg on the way, but she could smell musk coming from all directions, and the imagery wasn't helping the case either.
Blooming Love - short poem
I began writing it just to practice creating imagery, but it turned into a love poem. i wrote it while inspired by how relationships are created and grow. this was finished on 5/20/2016. written by me, fane star.
Pinnacle of Desire
\*\*\*author's note\*\*\* what started off as an attempt of a short, super fun write to stretch the normal amount of detail that i use on scenery and imagery eventually turned into a long, tedious write that i was trying to complete between
Natasha Tarbosaurus and the Gravid Gallimimus
#1 of natasha tarbosaurus i randomly got the urge to write after seeing some dinosaur imagery and this is what my fingers and brain dumped onto a few pages.
An Interview with Paper_Paws
The biggest thing i look for is vivid imagery, and the second is stylistic readability. the two often go hand in hand, since imagery is a stylistic balancing act. too many adjectives, for example, can make something less descriptive, not more.
Bio:Ariah
So she made a decision; she became a hero and started wielding pyrokinetic powers, and wears according imagery and equipment on her specialized power armour. in 2067, she is now at the ripe old age of 28.
When Father's Away
His dreams moved to raunchy imagery until his eyes opened and was met by the labrador. the dog held the pair of boxers between its teeth but had pressed it against ralph's nose. "what are you doing boy." ralph said with a groggy tone.
Dressed For Action (HH)
Shouldn't let rory junior access my visual centers so that he could come up with imagery like that...hmm... "everything alright?" i asked. "not too rough a start to the term?"