CatDance #30
At his grin, she revised, "let's try a get to _sleep_ early, mikael! jeeze, how can you even have anything left in those little balls!?" "tsk tsk tsk," mikael mock-scolded her. "such language! and i'll have you know they're not little either.
Fates Chosen 1- Fateful Meetings
revised version of the first chapter on the first story i ever made. the story itself isnt finished yet (procrastinator) but i plan to add more chapters in the future. i hope you enjoy~ arc (septimus), svette, other characters and story belong to me.
Demons
#4 of don't leave me - seasons one & two samson finds himself confronting some of his deepest fears.authors note dlm is currently undergoing revisions so please excuse the mess.
Ch12. The Devil's Chord
He was revising the final chorus and movement. tears kept stinging his eyes, but he worked away. he'd have to get this to the copyist by the afternoon for new prints.
A Fire in the Sky, Chapter III
All (current; a couple canons may make appearances later, if i don't revise around them) characters, to me. setting will remain adult for potential future language, violence, and adult themes.
Sandis' Coffee Break
Plot constructed by chedder cheese, revised by stealthbeast. story body constructed by stealthbeast, revised by chedder cheese. * * * sandis let out a long, vocalized yawn as she finished typing the last of her nightly notes.
All Bucked Up (Pt. 4)
I am sorry to say i am not pleased with how this chapter turned out description wise, i revised and revised yet never got it up to par in my eyes.
Liaisons, part 1
Original version: july 8, 2007 revised version: sept 2, 2009 additional revisions: dec 6, 2009
Liaisons, part 2
_-seres north_ revised sept 12, 2009 additional revisions feb 20, 2010
Research & Recreation
_-seres north_ original versions: may 1, 2007 and may 8, 2007 revised (and combined) version: aug 31, 2009 and sept 1, 2009 additional revisions: dec 6, 2009 and feb 20, 2010
2 - Relieving Pressure
She cried while shaking the paper in disgust, "i revised for three nights for that test! you spend the last three days on a sex run with several girls in the year and you get near perfect marks!"
Sins of the Fathers (Original-Revised)
Religious books over the ages warns of tribulation and trials for the sins on the fathers, and carried down through the following generations, even to the fourth and fifth of they who had sinned. He who was our great grandfather on our father's...