Astraifort Estate RC1
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Incubation, Chapter 2
His "error" maybe? "do you hate us? i mean us humans." "no. i don't hate you" "i don't understand you. you imprison your host's consciousness in the most cruel way possible, and you tell me that there's no hate behind it?"
The Snakening
The litany of bizarre logical and continuity errors? no, i definitely have to begin with the fact that this movie has some of the most realistic, gross, disturbing visual effects ever put on film.
Virtually Reality
All he could do was writhe and squirm a bit under the assault, all that his errored-out state would allow him. but so help him, he was getting into it.
A Dull Dragon - 2
"i hope you will forgive my error. and if you prefer, i will refrain from using any shortened form of your name..." "it was not an error. that would imply knowledge of what is correct. for your ignorance, though, i certainly forgive you.
At Second Glance, the Gods
Her peak was so intense that he thought, watching her tremble, her avatar might have errored out.
Inner Light - 01: Unexpected Chains Of Events
_unknown error. scannin can not be completed._ "i'm gonna use the pipsqueak's ribs as a toothpick!" what?. did he just- _warning.
Sweet, Sweet Dreams
This is my first entry into yiffstar, i apologise for any grammatical errors / tense errors. i hope you enjoy and please leave a comment that is constructive, bad or good, as long as i can get something from it!
A different kind of training - Prologue
I only did a brief proofread, so pardon any grammatical errors. for a better idea of what ronan looks like https://www.sofurry.com/view/648706 comments and critics are welcome as long as the criticism is constructive and not just flaming.
Getting friendly away from the party
(made a small last minute edit to fix an error) "her parents are going to kill her if they find out, or if we get a noise complaint."
Preamble
As always, spelling errors and gramatical failures are part of the charme :) and now have fun! **w**** h ****40k vs. furries** it is the 41st millennium.
Chapter 20: Welcome Aboard, Partners.
"actually i've never heard the effects before, but the other victims told that there was an error and it will remain error until they return to the game." al began to tremble in fear after knowing more the consequences by joining the team.