[Gay Hypnosis Text Game] - Astraifort Estate
Doggts/](https://www.furaffinity.net/user/doggts/)) who also was of help with his feedback on grammar issues during the developing of this game.
Note To Readers
Early on i was swamped with nothing but positive feedback i doubt it's a long shot to say i raised the bar of what some of you expect from me. thanks of ravens fire, omegafoxer, and shadow688, for the constant votes and feedback.
The Resort Adult Pokemon CYOA (v3.5)
I just want people to enjoy and give feedback about my obsessive writing project of the last few days. i'm happy to answer any questions or take any feedback, too!
The Struggle Within
Give me feedback
The Resort Adult Pokemon CYOA (v3.0)
I just want people to enjoy and give feedback about my obsessive writing project of the last few days. i'm happy to answer any questions or take any feedback, too!
Story Idea. Tell me what you think.
I'll write it regardless, but i thought i'd ask for feedback.
The Pack's Beginnings
Harshness of one's comments are allowed and feedback from the masses of the world are allowed and encouraged. if i get a ton of negative feedback, good! i know i'm doing something wrong and i'll try a different approach. positive feedback? good!
A Glaceons Life - Preview
------------------------------------------------------------ all i got for now, just to say i'm writing this on my phone and as i said before, any feedback is appreciated. stay tuned.
Hold Me
Losing all those comments feels quite bad for me, because i value your feedback so much.
Homeless Fox
feedback would be helpful. good feedback. not feedback telling me how much i suck. anyway beware of bad grammar, and terrible spelling.
Project X (pt7)
And another two artemis, grabbing four more arming himself and feedback.
Pigeonhole
feedback on the idea? here's the first word: pigeonholed- to assign to a definite place in some orderly system. please comment with feedback and come back tomorrow for day 2!