Feral Breeding
Please comment and critique! )) the warrior was asleep on the floor of the kennel where she had been leashed up after her milking. her breasts were still slightly swollen, pressing against her now-tight breastplate.
Meet Howard
\*rated adult for language and nudity. I am looking for some feedback on the work. writting style, characters, etc. Let me know what you think about the story. It's still a work in progress, but I thought I would show off what...
Daily Tale 07/24/14: Sick Day
If you could give me feedback and critique i'd love it. also, if you find any grammar or spelling errors please point them out. i also encourage all you furs who are writers or who want to write to try this idea and see how much they improve.
Path of the Lion (Dramatis Personae)
Enjoined #1 - path of the lion okay - so i've had my reservations about uploading this anywhere because the kingdoms enjoined trilogy is something that i really intend to be my magnum opus, but i finally decided that uploading it here and getting some critique
Transformative Works
An otter, offended at his foxy friend's critiques against his writing, finds that a pen that a certain lynch gave him has some interesting abilities. please comment and fav, it does help a lot (even if me asking makes me sound like a youtuber).
Extreme College Experiences: The Buck and the Bull (Rhino)
Also love critiquing. warning: 18+ naughty stuff the lights were off, and the college was lost in darkness.
Catching on the Train
Feel free to critique, enjoy, or do as you wish! "come on dad, you know you're gonna have to be quieter than that."
Engaged at the Relay
Again, comments and critiques welcome in the comments section below!**
The Prison ~ CYOA Java Game ~ V.1
Suggestions, ideas and critique are always welcome! version 1: bad horsie features: - one encounter with, like, 6 different possible 'fun' interaction paths. - that's it. yes, there'll be more for sure. no, i'm still writing them.
A Step Down - Prologue
Let me know if you liked it, and give me any advice/corrections/critique you can think of. don't be shy, just write a comment down there. if you really liked it, give me a watch, so you can know whenever i upload a new story.
Keeper of the woods
_ _as always any critique is greatly appreciated :) _ toriels journal, 211x, month of ice my name is toriel dreemurr, i am the caretaker & sole resident of the snowdin woods and i live here in exile; exile from a throne i willing surrendered
Garchomp wants, Garchomp gets
Any comments and critique and everything are well appreciated, thank you~ at 6'03", the blue dragoness clearly towers over myself.