Writing Advice: Show, Tell, Adverbs and Others
From a narrative point of view, it's both sparse and prevents a lot of other things being presented that engage a reader, such as actions, thoughts, feelings.
A Great Number of Guests, A Number of Great Guests
This is because it's a second person story that uses the reader themselves in the narrative. those tags were added because the site forces at least one to be used.
Goldilocks and the Three Bears
My name is...well, why don't you just refer to me as the narrator. my name is hardly of consequence to this story. i'm here to tell you that age old story of goldilocks and the three bears in a new way.
The Newbie's Perspective
Rook and kai stood up as i fell off my chair, but andrew kept narrating. _the hole that the satyr's cock was penetrating was not just real, but more real than anything in the world.
The Woman's Other Bible
Together, this narrative and the one given in the bible press the text beyond either/or to the realm of true religious thought.
No-Nut Narrator: Nov. 7-9 (Progress; Public; Soaked)
#4 of no-nut narrator for more info about #nonutnarrator, start here: https://www.sofurry.com/view/1508923 **nov. 7: progress** ajani tapped a finger against the tip of her partner's straining dick, then lifted it away.
B.D.F. | by KitsuneJey
**B.D.F.** By _KitsuneJey_ "What does B.D.F. stand for..., if you don't mind my asking?" "These letters on my tee? Heh, they aren't the initials of my name, bud, I assure you that." "Mine is Nevets, by the way... Yours?" "Just call...
1000 Swimmers
At some point i will rewrite it into a long form narrative. or vignette. this is a story of me and my boy. his paws grip my sides; i feel his hot breath in my ear. hind legs dance, sheath nudging, searching, probing. contact.
the otter princess and the kangaroo and her eggs
Like this one [17:25:52](>) red riot: ...a rhyming narrator?
The Peachwood Diner
#2 of narratives this is an original erotic narrative poem in trochaic hexameter with gay male and fat fur themes.
Tina's story moves to Sofurry
Ray groweled > > "i'm your narrator" > > "our narrator?" tina repeated > > "yes, your narrator. people can hear you speak, but they can't see you. so i narrate. thus, they know what they'd see, if they were here...." > > can you demonstrate?"
No-Nut Narrator: Nov. 22-24 (Heavy; Dripping; Neighbor)
#9 of no-nut narrator for more info about #nonutnarrator, start here: https://www.sofurry.com/view/1508923 slowly but surely, the ball ache continues.