They Come
When all drafts are here and comments read, i will redo the whole lot and post it up again. it's your choice to read or not to read. there will be mistakes here. it's a draft after all and i appreciate your comments, good or bad.
Shades Of Red ((RE-WRITE))
Yep so i decided to redo this. with different characters and stuff like that. i tried my best here, so i hope you like it ! ^.=.^ chapter 1: meeting him september 16th, 2011 it was a bright, and beautiful day.
Waste Away the Day - 4
#4 of waste away the world just accidentally reloaded and face-palmed myself but i'll try to redo this. my place now has internet making my life 10 times easier with homework and posting. starbucks was nice but those wooden chairs hurt after a while.
Outcast- Chapter 5
I made it myself and i'll be redoing it soon because the size proportioning and positioning of the words are sort of off, plus i sort of made it seem more like a banner for a story. done with my rambling :p
A Master's Lesson
I'd quickly do my stretches often being told by the masters to redo them in my haste. before being allowed to cut lose. most students practice a form, or made efforts to perfect a technique.
Ch4: Ourselves
I might even need to redo chapter 1 >.< at this point it should be obvious that every chapter is named after a ayumi hamazaki song, so i'll stop linking videos to the songs ^^' i really appreciate comments but...
He Who Would be Master: Prologue and Chapter 1 (redux)
#1 of spirit lord chronicles (redux) chap 1 of the redo! he who would be master he who would be master introduction magic is real, in forms many and varied.
Brother's Bonds Verson 2
Hey here is version two of the story i posted a few days ago. after being murdered by words by a critic, i decided to listen to his advice and redo the story, leading to this one. be honest on what you think and leave your comments below, both the good and
Tails' Trouble - Chapter 1 - To Steal From Thieves
This is a redo, rewrite, and touch up lemon. an old one... but there have been some requests to get it up!
Megalopolis - Cop vs. Ninja
The australian shepherd starts to walk and calculate, redoing the battle. "it was at least a 3 against 4 battle. brawl, blades and one armed with a spear. those are spear punctures."
The Trinket | Chapter Ten [Comm]
He thought to himself, stepping out of the pullup and redoing the front of his pants. feeling lighter than he had before, he stepped out of the stall with the pullup in his paws and headed over to the wet paper towel big.
The Trinket | Chapter Four [Comm]
Several times, he had to redo parts of his problem solving, wearing the eraser down on his pencil as he did so. to his dismay, he had erased so hard at one point that he tore a bit of the exam paper. sloppy.