Ch4: Ourselves
I might even need to redo chapter 1 >.< at this point it should be obvious that every chapter is named after a ayumi hamazaki song, so i'll stop linking videos to the songs ^^' i really appreciate comments but...
Waste Away the Day - 4
#4 of waste away the world just accidentally reloaded and face-palmed myself but i'll try to redo this. my place now has internet making my life 10 times easier with homework and posting. starbucks was nice but those wooden chairs hurt after a while.
Outcast- Chapter 5
I made it myself and i'll be redoing it soon because the size proportioning and positioning of the words are sort of off, plus i sort of made it seem more like a banner for a story. done with my rambling :p
A Master's Lesson
I'd quickly do my stretches often being told by the masters to redo them in my haste. before being allowed to cut lose. most students practice a form, or made efforts to perfect a technique.
To Murr With Love
After standing back up and redoing the ass zip, he said "follow me." he led me down a hallway to a staircase that emptied off in the basement.
He Who Would be Master: Prologue and Chapter 1 (redux)
#1 of spirit lord chronicles (redux) chap 1 of the redo! he who would be master he who would be master introduction magic is real, in forms many and varied.
Brother's Bonds Verson 2
Hey here is version two of the story i posted a few days ago. after being murdered by words by a critic, i decided to listen to his advice and redo the story, leading to this one. be honest on what you think and leave your comments below, both the good and
They Come
When all drafts are here and comments read, i will redo the whole lot and post it up again. it's your choice to read or not to read. there will be mistakes here. it's a draft after all and i appreciate your comments, good or bad.
Tails' Trouble - Chapter 1 - To Steal From Thieves
This is a redo, rewrite, and touch up lemon. an old one... but there have been some requests to get it up!
Megalopolis - Cop vs. Ninja
The australian shepherd starts to walk and calculate, redoing the battle. "it was at least a 3 against 4 battle. brawl, blades and one armed with a spear. those are spear punctures."
2nd December
Her father chuckled over the behavior of his daughter while jen got a make-up kit out of her lady bag and started to use it to redo her eyeshadow which, in her opinion, looked totally horrible and blurry from her sleep.
Boomeranged In China
At the checkpoint, you can force one team to redo the last two tasks. this... is gonna be fun to watch." it beeps off. \*\*\* the plane lands at 10:57 am in beijing and the racers immediately run out to the clue box.