Furrie's First Adventure: a lurid thought experiment
Try to be more descriptive, tell me how you feel, and don't use so many commas. here, like this:" she turned around to smirk at me; one paw slid its way down to her already revealing panties, and slid them down partway.
Blackmail
A comma. "got it," he said to the dragon. without so much as a goodbye, alec turned and paced away, strides rapidly carrying him away from the tiger and into the engineering building. * * * slam slam slam.
Blow Pop - Mommy Domme Boss Part 3
And if you have a complaint on my tense shifting or my comma splices. take a number! i know my severe weaknesses. i know i am not the best writer, i also know that i am not the greatest, but i feel my gift is understanding a persons wants.
Ander - Part 6: Subchapter 23
commas, exclamation points, question marks, hyphens, colons, _semi_-colons, the more the merrier. _are you really going to let that oaf push you around like this?
Acting with Animals: Part 2
I couldn't remember the name and i wasn't about to call him something with too many commas and apostrophes in it. no i went with drake, simple and not something that people would really raise an eyebrow at. i watched drake for some time.
demi clan
"my brat, if you fail to grasp the scroll, you be in comma forever, i am giving you my chakra, young brat." his chakra wrap around my legs. i open my eyes. luna was looking right at me. 'damn this chakra feels so weird then my own'.
Blow Pop - Mommy Domme Boss Part 1
And if you have a complaint on my tense shifting or my comma splices. take a number! i know my severe weaknesses. i know i am not the best writer, i also know that i am not the greatest, but i feel my gift is understanding a persons wants.
Lonliness
Or was he just hallucinating or in a comma and dreaming? his face went though a few quick emotional changes from confusion to fear and finally back to a goofy grin.
Good Girls Don't
The punctuation mark was a soft, fluffy comma-shaped tail that swayed gently over her largely unclothed rump--no, he told himself, it was an ass. one did not call a woman's presented hindquarters anything but that.
He's My Puppy
I'm just throwing this out there but i suck at commas so if you find any punctuation mistakes feel free to point out so i can fix them.
Hybrid theory- Part 1- Ghost town
There's supposed to be a comma after "humans"." a black thing explodes from the wall on my left, moving way too quickly for me to register what it is.
What We Have Suppressed
Her body curved in an eloquent line, making a comma at her hips and sliding down her slender legs. he always thought his mom was beautiful, but this moment was different. she was erotic and intoxicating to look at when she was like this.