Digging in the Dirt, part 3
One of things i did in this re-write, was to expand on a number of scenes. one of the reviewers said that the chapter could do with more detail and description.
Forbidden Chapter 16
This has been a complete and total re-write. i wrote this, from beginning to end over the last couple of days, because it was one of a small few chapters of forbidden i was unhappy with.
Gay Ape 2A
Made sure the cork was firmly in the inkpot - he wasn't about to re-write all those pages again! 'a treatise on same-sex behavior of the human male while in herd conditions.' the 3 d's - dull, dry, dreck.
A New Brother - Part 20
Just had to re-write some of the specials on the board. i'm due to finish in just over an hour. then its back to the dorms." "no rest for the wicked huh?"
Kobold Journal Part 1
So, i'll need to re-write a lot of passages in the new journal, and i'll use this one for stuff i wouldn't feel comfortable with master dathrokin reading over. i'm gonna go ahead and cut this entry short, journal.
A Vixen's Dragon Dildo
He could only get a few...wrote this one a while ago and i decided that i still liked it and it doesn't need an edit or a re-write.
Steamy Affairs On Ice
I really did have to re-write most of it, so i decided to submit it.
Boojum2B
I hope your life has a happier ending, than your story - afril ( small re-write for punctuation and clarity ) \* \* \* afril sighs and watches the rain come down. it soaks his robe and his fur but he doesn't care.
Ch 1 - Obtaining The Contract
I intended to interlace our posts, however that seems impossible as i don't have the patience, and parts of it may become inconsistent or highly repetitive or heavy re-writing.
Carnival Hearts Chapter 4
She really wanted to set tina up for success, re-writing the young woman's paradigm from the toxic masculinity that tim had been raised with.
Dook in Ying's Clothing
That: living suit yinglets, hollow propositions, flustered agreement, hammerspace suit, body sharing, yinglet diction, surprise she's a dragon, yinglet appetite, memory alteration, fraternal twinning tf, physical claim collar and reality warping: history re-write
Masquerade Doll
I'm not entirely happy with how it came out, mostly that the majority of the really good bits happen out of focus, but it's a flaw in the concept, and it was either re-write it or accept that it isn't perfect and let it go.