The Three Little Pigs
Probably has lots of unnecessary commas and awkward grammar. edit 6/17/2007: spellchecked and removed fixed word wrap. i noticed that some of the line breaks that should be present were not preserved; someone tell me if anything runs together.
Werewolf and Coffee
"dianne, he's in a comma. he hit his head in the fall. i don't know why he would linger in the parking garage.
A Trainer's Tale - Chapter 34
Not to mention the rumors about people and pokémon being put in commas or worse." he stopped approaching and gave me a curt nod. "_so be it._" he said. if he was insulted he didn't show it.
Big Mac Bangs Everybody Chapter 1
Had the above words been a more literal transcript, of course, they would have been presented sans commas, because pinkie pie never slowed down while she was talking, not even for a moment.
Adolphus' tails revised Chapter 07, part one: An introduction to sexual slavery
However, the editing is finished (and i have realised that i fling commas around like crazy) and this gives us part one of chapter seven. at over 13,000 words you can understand why i decided to break this chapter in two and give you this part first.
Chapter 2: The uncertainty
Lol) since this site does post a note to every body that is watching this story every time i do change, be it something as little as adding comma.
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Undoubtedly, the message was rude down to the last comma, but river didn't want to dwell on it now, as his neural chip had just alerted him that the next hyperloop had arrived.
Only Today
With the letter, he knew the phrasing by heart, each comma and full stop, every paragraph etched into his mind. but for his friends he went at it with a hacksaw, going straight for the kill and then leaving them to have him fill in the gaps.
Hell on Earth
The scar looked like a circle with three comma shapes cut out of it. sort of like a throwing glaive. he frowned, shook his hand and looked at it again. the scar was still there.
A Fantastic Vacation
.: to iamthepumpkinking13 atta yahoo dotta comma: i tried to email you back but it failed; no such e-mail or something like that. so, thanks! -h) --- sunset. well, not really. not yet, anyways.
Going Home p. 30-60
He said this rapidly, with no inflection, as if someone had mixed both hands in his punctuation and stolen out all the commas. "ana . . ." nace smiled at him, guided his muzzle and gently got him to focus.
Be Careful What You Wish For
Her accent - from the name, he'd been expecting (with something of a hope, admittedly) for something italian, and yet what came out was in a perfect british received pronunciation - but it was also the fact that she seemed to be able to talk without using commas