Locks and Picks: Chapter 1: Making a splash.
A couple of notes before the story starts: 1) i am looking for a couple of revisers that can get the story back to me quickly, i had problems with revising this chapter this week and that was why this was delayed. 2) this will be an adult story, but there
How It Goes - Theo's Tale
"don't worry about me, focus on your revision," scott says as he walks over to the bear. theo tilts his head as scott nuzzles his ear; he snatches scott's shirt by the collar and pulls him into a tender kiss.
Only Human (Revised), Chapter 2
#2 of only human (revised) centuries after the apocalypse, humanity is gone and earth is uninhabitable. genetically engineered super soldiers now rule the solar system.. then a derelict space craft appears, a forgotten relic of a long forgotten time.
Series Revised 2015
#26 of pokã¨-treat series revision, mostly fixed grammar and spelling. if it seems that italics are missing, they are.
The Dream That Turned Real, Part 1
#1 of the dream that turned real (revised 8-10-11) the dream that turned real by triple xxx werew...
Story of Kass: Song of the Rito
A hylian with fiery red hair the green notes from the bandoneon circled and danced around it's head made the bard revise his opinion of the spell's effect.
Weapon – Active again
#2 of weapon i wanted to catch some sleep on the way, but status updates were coming in from the teams on the ground about troop movements and positions, so i had to revise and rebuild my plans on the fly, trying to constantly adjust until the guard patrol
Diamantina Drover - Chapter One -
The diamantina drover chapter one - unfriendly meetings (c) cederwyn whitefurr revised and expanded, 28th november, 2012 all rights reserved sobbing, the young gazelle anthro clutched the old, cracked and fading picture to her chest, hugging
Behind Yellow Eyes: Chapter 22
revise the repair time, how long to rebuild this controller?" "three hours, ten minutes."
Teenage Troubles: Chapter 1
Deciding to revise all of this series, so that it's better and so that i can remember what's happened. no majors changes will occur, just a few fixes and added words. as always, tell me if you find any mistakes!story and characters © kalebthecat
The Erotic World of Hermpires: Anais beta
Of doing the same to others in order to spread its magical alteration of bodies like some kind of viral infection, granting me some kind of queen-like status as the first in a hypothetically enormous colony of sexually warped beings that will completely revise
Dear Journal (First-Person Mrs. Krieg POV)
Unfortunately, i had to revise parts of my diet. for example, with my husband mark to help me, i've had to avoid wine, too much dairy, as well as caffeine.