Humiliation (Pt. 2 of Force of Nature)
Warning: this story is totally unedited. it also has a classic hawk abrupt ending. thbt. * * * hawk woke up to a sea of yellow. "what the fuck is this?" he jumped out of bed to the rustling of paper.
Two Much Lust (Insatiable Beast)
In it's current form it's unedited (written down in two sessions and plopped down for you all to enjoy without proofreading), but i plan on editing it first thing tomorrow.
Red Light Ch 1
"please send raw unedited pictures into the email listed below, along with personal contact details, and we'll get back to you if we like what he see."
101: Unexpected Visitors
The only way to read the unedited chapters in advance is to pledge - all tiers can read it, make suggestions, and speculate about what will happen on my forum!
The Truth About Cats and Dogs
The only way to read the unedited chapters in advance is to pledge - all tiers can read it, make suggestions, and speculate about what will happen on my forum!
Lykos - Lone Wolf pt. 20
\* so, chuckling mentally, ben let her have the unedited version. he played through every moment, and felt her shock and horror as together, they watched kyle's face go slack as his severed head laid in the snow, facing ben.
Torpedo Run Chapter 10
Senator bull tells me a military coup has been in the works for some time, and he's been unable to send unedited reports out of system.
Strake Gets His
Kirsch copyright 2008 warning: this story is unedited.
What's Your Name?
This is the unedited version. for the version edited by thurston howl, i'd like to refer you to the anthology "slashers", in which this story is featured.
The Eye of Aquana
This is the unedited version of this story. this story is featured in the first of the "divine clawmedy" books called "infurno". infurno is an anthology that revolves around the many circles of hell and what the inhabitants have done to end up there.
Good Boy
Dog pile is all about puppy play and can be found here: https://www.storenvy.com/products/30649762-dogpile this is the unedited version. the edited version can be found in the anthologies mentioned above. good boy "i can't take this anymore!"
INSTINCT
The story you read here is the unedited version.