Deception (Bread And Circuses)
Rebel, shoot deadly pin, terror spread by flag of false, feel the increase in your pulse, allow us to take care of you, for we know better than you do, your children are not yours to raise, a god you aren't allowed to praise, self-defense and critical
Priorities Upon Waking (Otherwise Untitled)
~ she chafed against the difficulty of de-tangling the mission parameter from amongst the nest of critical alerts and overdue notifications that were trying to intrude on her mind.
An A-pear-ent Issue
However, it was in sven's nature to always over-analyze things, once even leading him to criticize a pack of off-brand gummy worms at the dollar store for shoddy packaging.
Dak's Day.
This is my first attempt at a yiff ever so pleeease be gentle but constructive criticism never hurt anyone, right? normal disclaimer stuff, gotta be 18 or older to read this whatever.... on to the story!
Chihaku of Zeal - Chapter 3 - An Evil Plot For Revenge
Now...what kind of criticism do you guys think? do you think she should've been hanged along with her victims? how did this make you feel?" said the raccoon reading the book while walking around in the front of the classroom.
You promised (Chapter 1)
criticism is welcome, as i would like to improve the quality of my writing. so without further ado, and no more gabbing by me...
A Different Kind of Wet Dream
Please leave constructive criticism in the comments to help in bettering my stories.** ** ** **a different kind of wet dream** ** ** _wet, why is it that in most of my dreams i feel wet?
Engineer Johnson's personal log, Entry 213
Still, any lifepod in a meteor shower as the saying goes, so all of us piled in the emergency escape shuttle and shot off as quickly as the thrusters would take us before the ship's engines went critical.
Chapter Ten
He had been suspended pending further investigation as the new police chief, a rather critical female vulnira, was instantly suspicious of his tale of a sniper attempting to murder him.
Love is not a Sin
Please be kind, i would like only constructive criticism.
The Struggle Within
criticism,praise,etc. hope you like and enjoy:) prologue. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ the eevee shivered in his sleep.not from the cold but from what happened minutes ago.
A Wolfs Howl
More writing hehe, i know i'm not the best writer here but ones heart should be more important then the content outputted, yet i do like constructive criticism.