Writing Advice: Show, Tell, Adverbs and Others
Imagine if further information was needed throughout a new hope in such a way: to explain what the clone wars are, or what a hyperspace drive is.
Honor Above All Else
Goddamn i wish they could put hyperspace buoys in the area. i don't like long trips." "yeah no kidding captain." samuel responded with a chuckle. "mind holding down the fort while i grab a coffee?" kitt asked. "sure thing cap'n."
"Daggers of Darkness, Book 2, The Heart of Élendor": Chapter-8
The main holo-display came on just in time to show an erratic hyperspace tunnel endpoint forming. rha'an leaned forward in her seat, watching carefully.
an endless voyage ch 50
"ah kin fly a heavy dreadnought battleship through hyperspace, s' how hard kin it be." maya said. then "all jokin aside though, yeah, ah got mah confederate cdl last time ah's here on shore leave."
Virtually Real Part 7: Grand Theft Starship
"you've traveled through hyperspace before." "only once and i was unconscious in a containment pod. if anything traveling through house's portals are more exciting."
But What a Thrill!
"the energy is fracturing the boundary between us and hyperspace. some of the ship's in the future, some's in the past--why do you think they call it a _goddamned 'rift,' jackal_?" "i don't know! i'm not a scientist! can you stabilize it?"
The Wolf Hunters - Episode 8 - Confrontation
Turning to carl, i yelled, "if the coms is still open, benson, jump to hyperspace. you're not going to win against them. jump to hyperspace." there was a burst of static. "we, we can't.
5. My New Life-4
"roger, maintain minimum visibility and set course for that hyperspace exit site, full impulse; weapons and shields at the ready." "aye, sir!" the whole bridge crew answered together. three hours later...
Partners
Seven ships just dropped out of hyperspace, case. their weapons are hot." "the _alternative_?" casey snarled into the radio. "the alternative is you _fuck off_."
Merged Worlds 6
Royce nodded looking at the hyperspace tunnel ahead of the shuttle. he wonders what is fate is going to throw at him next as the vixen sets the autopilot. the human grinned as a hand leads him to the back of the shuttle.
A Place in the Universe chapter 3
The ship screeched out of the atmosphere of fortentis and with a bright flash from the engines a blue and white swirling vortex opened in space just ahead of the ship, sending it into hyperspace.
An Endless Voyage: ch:3
On the bridge...maya reclined her captain's chair, listening to her staff giving reports, and issuing appropriate responses as she sat there, staring out into the neon colors of hyperspace. she always found this view relaxing.