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A Fated Reality-Chapter 22

** **critique me; i don't know where, but it felt like i missed something...** **moncheli!**

Alakazam, Bad Language, Badassery, Dusknoir, Female, Gardevoir, Gothitelle, Greninja, Human, Lucario, Male, Pokemon, Quilava, Story Development, blaziken, grovyle

Chapter 2: Nemesis

critique me please... praise me on what i did good and scorn me on what i did bad. thanks for reading and be prepared for the next chapter that i am going to call fear of the dark!_**

Cock And Balls Torture, Dragon, Drama, Evil, Fox, Gay Relationships, Half-Dragon, M/M, Oral, Violence (Not In Yiff)

Heavy is the Crown 3

You won't be critiquing me, nor lashing out against me. not if you want your friends to be happy. and i know that you care about them deeply," the gray-scaled dragon said, shaking his head. "but i believe we understand each other, yes?"

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Becoming a Perverted Ornament 5

“and he’ll get that, scelrus, but if you keep critiquing me –” “you will do nothing.” “to you.” again, the tension, but it faded quickly.

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Truths

I also ask to critique me as gently as possible. this is my first time writing a story with sex in it. inspiration for this story: starcraft ; pendulum - watercolor, witchcraft, under the waves, and set me on fire.

Human, M/F, Magic, Vixen, War

So it Begins

This is also my first non poetry item submitted to any kind of public viewing so please critique me. most of the spelling errors should have been taken care of, but there might be some grammar mistakes.

Action, Dragon, Dragoness, M/F, Vaginal, Violence (Not In Yiff), Virgin

Fur and Skin: The Wolfess

Keera settled in closer as she critiqued me. it made sense. i must have radiated nervous excited energy. i wasn't listening to the body and eyes of of the females while i was tried to greet them with my words.

Alcohol, Anatomically Correct, Canine, Cowgirl, Fantasy, First Person, First Time, French Kissing, Fur and Skin(world), Heavypetting, Human, Interspecies, Introduction, Kissing, Love, M/F, Medieval, Mild Romance, Oral, Story Series, Vaginal, Wolf, Wolfess

Avalanche of Love -Final Episode (18)

"i get it, my mother actually lived the life, didn't just dream it, but that also made it worse since she knew exactly what to look for and how to critique me.

Anal, Athlete, Bathing, Bitterness, Blowjob, Brother, Competing, Doggy style, Drama, First Time, Heat, Incest, Lap sex, Leopard, Losing virginity, Love, Love confession, Male on female, Mentors, Missionary, Oral Sex, Romance, Sister, Snow Leopard, Snowboarding, Spanking, Teasing, Twincest, Twins, Virgin, Young Love, Younger sister, blonde, competition, jaded, next generation, older brother, rivalry, scars, second chance, sports

The Curious Foxes, Chapter 13: Got Good at Creepy

Before the door shut, i could hear touchstone critique me, “forseti, i can hear you from here-” the door was closed i could hear any more of his expert opinion. i closed my eyes, and silently cast creepy.

Arctic Fox, Awngaimene, Blackbird, Book, Comedy, Fantasy, Fiction, Florence, Folk, Forseti Fox, Fox, Furry, Gargoyle, Horror, Magic, Modern, Monster, SFW, The Curious Foxes, Touchstone, Urban, Vulpine, Witchcraft, Wolf, pagan

There's No Way I Got Assigned To My Older Sister?! The Story Of How The Anthrostate Gave Me An Unthinkable Marriage

I've gotten better, but you've always been good at critiquing me," she asks. "i'm busy," he says. "you can wait a bit to work on homework. we can hang out, and then i can help you afterwards," she offers. "you? help me with homework?

ADHG, Adhg - Fandom, Adhg/, Anthrostate, Blow jobs, Cheetah, Cock rings, Come as Lube, Creampie, Dom/sub, F/M, Face-sitting, Female Anthro/Male Human, Femdom, Foot Fetish, Foot Jobs, Forbidden Love, Furry, Furry (Fandom), Gender Role Reversal, HMOFA, Hand & Finger Kink, Hand jobs, Heat, Impregnation, Incest, Intercrural sex, Interspecies Relationship(s), Interspecies romance, Interspecies sex, Masturbation, Mating Cycles/In Heat, Mutual Masturbation, Oral Sex, Orgasm Delay/Denial, Orgasm Denial, Original Furry Character(s), Original Male Human Character(s), POV Second Person, Possessive behavior, Romance, Rough Oral Sex, Rough Sex, Scents & Smells, Sibling incest, Spanking, Spit Kink, Vaginal Sex, body worship, brother/sister, estrus, scent marking

The Deer Hunt

Serena grew positively catlike as she asked, "can i have bobby critique me as a dog? he has the experience, since he took care of sheila."

Discovery, Human, Teenager, Werewolf, old man