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A Fated Reality-Chapter 22

** **critique me; i don't know where, but it felt like i missed something...** **moncheli!**

Alakazam, Bad Language, Badassery, Dusknoir, Female, Gardevoir, Gothitelle, Greninja, Human, Lucario, Male, Pokemon, Quilava, Story Development, blaziken, grovyle

So it Begins

This is also my first non poetry item submitted to any kind of public viewing so please critique me. most of the spelling errors should have been taken care of, but there might be some grammar mistakes.

Action, Dragon, Dragoness, M/F, Vaginal, Violence (Not In Yiff), Virgin

Truths

I also ask to critique me as gently as possible. this is my first time writing a story with sex in it. inspiration for this story: starcraft ; pendulum - watercolor, witchcraft, under the waves, and set me on fire.

Human, M/F, Magic, Vixen, War

Avalanche of Love -Final Episode (18)

"i get it, my mother actually lived the life, didn't just dream it, but that also made it worse since she knew exactly what to look for and how to critique me.

Anal, Athlete, Bathing, Bitterness, Blowjob, Brother, Competing, Doggy style, Drama, First Time, Heat, Incest, Lap sex, Leopard, Losing virginity, Love, Love confession, Male on female, Mentors, Missionary, Oral Sex, Romance, Sister, Snow Leopard, Snowboarding, Spanking, Teasing, Twincest, Twins, Virgin, Young Love, Younger sister, blonde, competition, jaded, next generation, older brother, rivalry, scars, second chance, sports

The Deer Hunt

Serena grew positively catlike as she asked, "can i have bobby critique me as a dog? he has the experience, since he took care of sheila."

Discovery, Human, Teenager, Werewolf, old man

There's No Way I Got Assigned To My Older Sister?! The Story Of How The Anthrostate Gave Me An Unthinkable Marriage

I've gotten better, but you've always been good at critiquing me," she asks. "i'm busy," he says. "you can wait a bit to work on homework. we can hang out, and then i can help you afterwards," she offers. "you? help me with homework?

ADHG, Adhg - Fandom, Adhg/, Anthrostate, Blow jobs, Cheetah, Cock rings, Come as Lube, Creampie, Dom/sub, F/M, Face-sitting, Female Anthro/Male Human, Femdom, Foot Fetish, Foot Jobs, Forbidden Love, Furry, Furry (Fandom), Gender Role Reversal, HMOFA, Hand & Finger Kink, Hand jobs, Heat, Impregnation, Incest, Intercrural sex, Interspecies Relationship(s), Interspecies romance, Interspecies sex, Masturbation, Mating Cycles/In Heat, Mutual Masturbation, Oral Sex, Orgasm Delay/Denial, Orgasm Denial, Original Furry Character(s), Original Male Human Character(s), POV Second Person, Possessive behavior, Romance, Rough Oral Sex, Rough Sex, Scents & Smells, Sibling incest, Spanking, Spit Kink, Vaginal Sex, body worship, brother/sister, estrus, scent marking