Unexpected Visit
Wrote this in more of a play scene style which means this story is more dialogue heavy and has less setup with short descriptions.
Rogue Wind - The Nobles
. \*\* \*\* \*\* \*\* \*\* \*\* \*\* \*\* \*\* \*\* another dialogue heavy chapter finished yay! i can't really think of much to say besides i found this story needed an arctic fox or two.
MHO - Cult of the Crimson Isles - Chapter 3
Pretty dialogue heavy, but i promise there's action on the horizon! please remember to leave a comment to share any thoughts you have about this chapter! i can only grow with feedback!
Indifferent Nature
This one came to be mainly because i wanted to try writin gsomething without dialogue, because i felt like my previous stories were a bit too dialogue heavy. not sure how well i did that, but anyway, this is what you get.
The Secret to Proper Paragraphing and Dialogue
Just for the record, i write extremely dialogue-heavy fiction. when i find that a dialogue tag is indeed needed in my story to identify who is talking, i see it as a red flag that indicates that all action has come to a screeching halt.
Don't Look Now
Yes, another dialogue heavy chapter, sorry. despite being a short journey, on the drive to wendy's house jake found himself unable to stop fidgeting. he was nervous, his limbs tight and heart racing.
Mystic Heart Odyssey - Chapter 12
A bit more dialogue heavy here, but should help shed some light on the land lykou and kuna have found themselves in- and the dangers that may lay ahead of them.
Downtime - Ch. 6 (MHO)
A lot more dialogue heavy this time, but hopefully you'll enjoy the banter... and a little bit of revelation~_ _-llox_ \_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\
Magnus Chronicles: Ancients Awakening: Chapter 5
This is definitely the most dialogue heavy chapter i have written so far. as always, i'm very appreciative of critiques and constructive feedback.
Journals of a Dark Elf Dancer: Chapter 5
As a result, this is a fairly dialogue heavy chapter. so to soften the blow, let's start off with some sex! ^\_^ critiques are welcome, as i am not entirely comfortable with dialogue.
Jayden, Chapter 3
#3 of the halfblood chapter three (duh) this is my first dialogue heavy chapter, so any tips there would be helpful...
(C) Black and Blue and White
dialog heavy, leading to lots of edging, light bdsm, and strangling. was a fun time to write this. it's the farthest forward in jenasys' canon timeline that i ever have written. i'll get to her origin some day.