Wrong Side Of Town
Any constructive critisisms are much appreciated. even 'you suck balls' as long as you tell me why :d
DANgER - kEEP AWAY
I've ackwardly translated yiff scenes to this format, so i'd appreciate any advice, critisisms, or general abuse if you're willing to share.
Chapter 5: a little side track
#5 of freindly group hi guys, did this in one day suprisingly, erm a little side track for another character and a new writing style please please please critisism so i know whether to use this style again or not usual under 18 disagree with gay,
Winning/The stream
Please feel free to critisize. i slipped out of the stream; the water sliding off of my smooth scales and the short hair between them.
Chapter 1 Promises - The Start
Hence kuro couldn't bring himself to despise the old fox. and for that had been critisized by the old fox, continuosly referred to as weak, and too emotional.
Toilet Break
Please keep any critisism constructive, and please, please don't give it high praise and/or a high rating just because its my first story. the only way i'll improve is if people are honest.
A Chance Glance
Any and all helpful comments and critisism is appreciated and would be considered quite helpful.
chaos_monster and blacksun: predator and prey
Blasksun... you have to be eighteen or older... hell you won't even get the beauty if your not.. so if your to young.. go watch tv.. mtv2 might just show a boob... for those who can enjoy this.. well enjoy i took alot of thought writing this so constructive critisism
From Chains to Riches: Chapter 5
. ~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~ end of part 5 i really appreciate comments on my writing, weather it be one to congratulate me or to critisize me, i still appreciate it.
ChurchBoy
Any comments or critisism should be sent to [[email protected]](/cdn-cgi/l/email-protection) * * * churchboy ever since that disease worked its' way through the world like a plague, humans have grown scarce.
Niko and Danny: Day 1
.^ please comment on typos and stuff, critisize me!!! i must know if i'm a good writer or not. if i am, then i might continue this series i have in mind ^.^ p.s.
Dragon's Gift - Chapter 7 (WIP)
If anyone sees any errors in my story, please do not be afraid to give me some creative critisism, hopefully i can pull this fully around with the next few edits ^.^ chapter 7 the trio departed the makeshift village before the sun even rose the next morning