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Potential MvP Rewrite(looking for feedback!)

I'm definitely looking for feedback! **notes: these are writing samples of two potential story ideas for a rewrite of my 'experimental' si story, man vs. planet.

Action, Adventure, Human, Krystal, Sci-Fi, Starfox, Story, Violence (Not In Yiff)

Story Idea. Tell me what you think.

I'll write it regardless, but i thought i'd ask for feedback.

Cub, Revenge, Trench-Coat, murder, stealth

The Pack's Beginnings

Harshness of one's comments are allowed and feedback from the masses of the world are allowed and encouraged. if i get a ton of negative feedback, good! i know i'm doing something wrong and i'll try a different approach. positive feedback? good!

Cub, Forest, Gender Shifting, Hermaphrodite, Impregnation, Incest, Multiple, Other/Herm, Vaginal, Virgin, Wolf

project X (Pt 4)

Me and feedback will share one and you guys can use the other to hold your stuff." rex said taking a seat at a pile of rubble. "you did? t...t...tt.that's great!!!" feedback yips happily.

War, apoclypse, multi-writer

Under the influence Pt. 1 (Draft/Feedback Wanted)

**Olivian couldn't remember seeing the grand hall of his lineage populated like this. Not that the admittedly clumsy structure of mud, stone and wood had ever been a grand sight to begin with. Still, his father -and his father before him- had...

Adult, Age Difference, Bodypaint, Drinking, Drunk, Hyena, Lion, M/M, Magic, Male/Male, Mild Abuse, No-Yiff, Size Difference, Story, Tribal

Thinking With Portals

(author's note: this is my first time posting something i've written, so i'd love to hear any feedback or comments that you have. thanks for reading!

Anthro, Asexual, Bedroom, Canid, Consensual, Creampie, Cuddle, Cuddling, Cum, Dick, F/Herm, Female, Futa, Futanari, Herm/solo, Hermaphrodite, Kissing, Knotting, Pansexual, Panties, Portal, Pussy, Risk of Pregnancy, Romance, Short, Short Story, Vaginal, Vaginal Knotting

Warframe: Suiting Up

Legs splayed wide, and fingers delved into soft depths that burned even hotter as he arched his back to feedback distortions of a pleasure he didn't know was possible.

Female, Fingering, Human, Interspecies, Machine, Male, Masturbation, Mindlink, Missionary, Operator, Vaginal, Warframe, mesa

Zebra In An Alleyway

feedback is appreciated. all credit goes to the artist. art is not owned by me. feedback is appreciated. zuhala was a hooker, who scored on average a hundred dicks every night. she destroyed the girth of their small dicks with her large ass.

Anal, Anthro, Booty, Butt, Cub, Cum, Sex, Short Story, Yiff, Yiffy, Zebra

project x (pt 3) the calm before the storm

"no don't go feedback if you're going i'm coming too." i'm sorry i can't let you do that." feedback said "uhh guys i can't keep them down much longer." he said slashing another zombie. "i'm sorry goodbye" feedback said handing foxtrott the sword.

Sacrifice, War

Pocket Fox: Objectification

"ok, right so we have arranged for a few small focus groups to come in and give us some feedback on the product. i'd like you to take them through a bunch of questions and get their feedback. you brought it with you, didn't you?"

Anal, Anthropomorphic, Blowjob, Bobcat, Fox, Gay, Kissing, Knot, M/M, Male/Male, Toys, Wolf

Writing Advice: Show, Tell, Adverbs and Others

Ultimately, the best way to spot whether you're telling or showing too much is by trusting the feedback from your readers.

Advice, Guide, Self-help, Tutorial, non-fiction, writer, writing

Reprogramming a Cyborg

But there’s nothing like the haptic feedback of the skin, the curves, the slight tremors when you reach the right spot,” explained briareos.

Anal Sex, Bara, Body hacking, Briareos Hecatonchires, Cyborg, Domination/Submission, Gay, Hecatonchires, Homosexual, Hypnosis, Male, Male/Male, Mm, Nonconsensual, Original Character, Rape, appleseed, briareos, hacking, mind break, powerbottom, smut