First in Line
Dustafyer interjected as he flipped a jade coin between his fingers.
Electroluxe!, Chapter Eight.
Vance interjected. “if it weren't for this plastic crap we wouldn't be having these problems anyway.
Zion: Light of the New Moon Part 2, Ch 1.3 Myrh
Jerard interjected, eyes glowing a faint bluish-green. he motioned to the stone wall, "the doors are magically sealed.
The Bully, Mom, and Tomorrow's Revenge
Hannah interjects, her eyes almost pleading to him. looking at the equine victoriously looking back at him beyond his nude wife, a light tear strolls down diago's cheek.
Harmony's Warriors: Soar - Act III - 17 - The Calm Before the Storm
"sorry, but time is of the essence," spitfire interjected, and rainbow nodded. "spitfire is right, agent spike.
Living Legends: Volume (Mew)Two: Part 2
She interjected, before he could finish. peter huffed and crossed his arms, and the mewtwo just laughed at him, eyes seeming to glow with mirth. "so tell me, what is it that you do here?" she asked calmly.
Loveless Incantation: Chapter 14
Lacey interjects. initiating a slow rhythm, i guide her in a dance. gradually, she loosens up, if only to prevent herself from stumbling over her stiff legs.
Writing Tips vol. 4
One thing i see a lot of is accidental omniscience; random interjections with thoughts of characters other than the current pov character.
Dog Gone Day - A Brave Fool (Male)
Your sister interjects, looking scared to death. "p-please, w-we just want to go.""oh, but it wouldn't be fair to me, would it?" the hooded woman asks. "me, a poor, frail lady, being left alone to wander the streets?"
Sutopia, Ch 8
The older woman interjected. "what about getting a new one, and then having your old one upgraded-- then you can have two to use.
Pups Again
The guy bashing continued, and i even interjected a few stories when their complaints reminded me of some interactions at work.
Altruistic Intent - CH. 10
"yes, ma'am," he quietly interjects. "y-yes, ma'am," lisa repeats, her eyes meeting his before turning back down to her new bowl of soup.