Choosing Lycanthropy
Usually i write in 3rd person and in past tense. this is my attempt at writing in 1st person and present tense. any way, thanks for reading! comments are welcome! photography: by ryan buchanan **choosing lycanthropy** here it is.
Presentation - Writing Style
The narrative voice is always past tense, accept in very specific situations. 1stperson writing bothers me. i also dislike jumping between too many characters. **show, don't tell** it took me forever to figure out what this means.
God of Marriage Saga: Intermission 3: Thorn and Fang
You see, it was a past-tense cult. a failed one, i'd tried to orchestrate. well, today, i was going to play a mock-game of cultist simulator, where i reconstructed thorn and fang. ... why would i do such a dumb thing?
The Dogs: Not Exactly Night - Episode II
"don't be - maybe you're right - maybe i should use past tense." cody grabbed andrew's arm in protest. "hey now, c'mon, don't think like that!
To Dream of Darkness II - Ch 33
You speak of him only in the past tense. was he taken from you?" "yes. he died there, of a fever that had no cure. i tried to find a way to save him with my magic, but i fear i have always been pathetic with healing spells.
Full Body Massage
With speed befitting a larger animal, jade rushed onto the table, and the towel protecting his dignity transitioned into past tense as it vanished within the blink of an eye.
Minotaur Masseuse 6: Reflection and Revelation
past-tense." he stood up slowly. "stand." he said curtly. trembling she stood before the bull, a full two and a half feet shorter then him.
Forever by your side
It was a bit challenging, i do enjoy writing in the past tense a lot and have my characters recollect what they know, still, it was fun.
Scrap: Abendrot
I also love the german modal verbs möchten (present tense) and mochten (past tense) - you can kind of see why in the last two lines of the poetry.
Journey to another world ch40
As in past tense." i stood up and offered him a right hand up to which he accepted, and i pulled him up. "people make mistakes all the time. that doesn't mean that they shouldn't be forgiven for said deeds."
Rebirth ch7
past tense. meaning no longer one." ‘i still don't comprehend what you mean by that. are you a human or a pokemon? you certainly can't be both.' she said a little irritated as i'd interrupted her.
Respite [Ch. 9 - ~Magistasia~]
Mavy noted the past tense in his sentence. "where is your mom anyway?" liam was silent. he looked down into the water and maverick could feel the story behind the silence as the sullen little kit's ears drooped down. "ah! s-sorry...