The creature in the barn
Do also bare in mind i'm from the uk so my spelling will be different to those of you who write using american english ;) no idea why the commas are turning up as question marks in a diamond, if anyone knows how to fix that, please say.
When bark turns to bite- Hunted
This is going to be painful, but if i can't get those bullets out and get him an antidote he will slowly die or go into a comma." she bent over him ready to dig into the wounds to pull out the bullets. risuke nodded and stood again.
Lazzxion Of The Rebellion - Love Circulation
I thought i might have been dead or had gone into a comma. i saw the face of what i believed to be a dog but blacked out again unable to get anything more than a burry sight of a memory.
One Lucky Cub part V
Baloo: "sorry little britches but apparently two of the three clerks to do the paper work for this event have been deported for doing comma mistakes, so there is a long line and it might be some time." kit groaned but conceded.
Day 23) Cruel
Gonna tell me that i missed a comma in my rhetorical essay!? or fucking which nose play-dopehead fucked airestoatle with? forget it, i am the head of the fucking varsity team.
Curiosity trapped the copycat.
I knew i would find you here, you're about to get an ethylic comma! i'll get us a ... " and then the fake fox fell unconscious. the fake fox woke up. he felt weird, he was feeling the cool wind caressing his body. he realized he was naked.
Writing Tips vol. 2
When the quote ends in a direct modifier to the quote, such as 'he said', you end the quote in a comma (or question mark or exclamation point, if such is the case). you don't capitalize the following word unless it is a proper noun.
The Plan Fulfilled
Even in low doses it's still deadly so we need to give kenny plenty of rest, otherwise he might die or fall into a comma." said darren shooing the other camp mates away from the bed. "how long do i have to lay here before i can strangle you!?"
[Commison]Tesa has a new life
Commission for gogogplease forgive lack of comma spilt some beer on keyboard didn't clean well enough and it ended up being stuck though i did get a few in there. i will not be writing any more adult+ stories. also i messed up on tense sorries.
Road Crew - Ch. 2 - Looking back Pt. 1
Never mind the excessive use of commas - i'm german; i can't do any different! :d as always, comments, criticism, pointing out errors, suggestions on what to do better and anything in between is more than welcome!
Tasting Session
The horse stood stock still, eyes half closed as dark's tongue dipped into his nostrils, sweeping within the comma to a smooth glimmer of illicit equine.
Bookstore Back Door
"i taught you how to use commas," i muttered, rubbing his shaft. it wasn't getting any harder. his phone buzzed again. "group message from jenny. i hope he's not showing you his cock." "she's asking if we're fooling around," i said.