A Chance Glance

Any and all helpful comments and critisism is appreciated and would be considered quite helpful.

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A new school chapter 2: Adam's family

I dunno.. some people say i write good... others say .... different things :p but still.. any constructive critisism is appreciated ^.^ and leave comments if you want the story to continue! ~your friendly neighborhood freaky fox jake

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Pathfinder: Intro

So please post critisisms and comments in the comment section or something. i want to know what you guys think of it s'yeah. be brutally honest. any way... here. .__. nara woke in the abandoned, lean-to shed.

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Toilet Break

Please keep any critisism constructive, and please, please don't give it high praise and/or a high rating just because its my first story. the only way i'll improve is if people are honest.

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Boys Like You Chapter Two: The Chemicals Between Us

Even if he was hated by all the girls and critisized, no one would deny he was sexy. the boy that could even seduce the straightest guys in school had to be.

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My Awesome 4/20

Thanks for deciding to choose my story for your viewing pleasure ^^ i welcome constructive critisism and comments on what you think of the story.

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Iron and Agate

Please don't let my pride get in the way of constructive critisism. if grammar and spelling is off its because i wrote it on my phone and cut n pasted it here. right now i'm looking at content.

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Guard dog!

Please ffeel free to leave feedback, critisism is always wellcome too the morning after passed like any other... boring classes, hard classes, then lame classes, followed by harder classes.

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The Gate-Way: Chapter 12 – Celebrating A Job Well Done

As always all comments, constructive critisism and suggestions are welcome and greatly appreciated. i hope you enjoy this chapter.

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A Day In The Forest

The end kinda ok now that youve read the story please put constructive critisism comments about how i could do better see notes depending if i feel like it i may continue this story excpecially if a lot of people like it i will probably start over

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Losing/The Fortress

critisism is again welcome, glad some of you liked the first one. hello bro, having fun were we?

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Of Wolf and Man: Chapter one

As allways comments, questions, and critisism are all welcome

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