Star Fox, The Unexpected Mission, Final Chapter: Just Deserts
0~3rd person~0 there were no words to describe how much suffering falco and wolf are both enduring right now. both pilots were stripped naked among the eyes of the sharp claw.
A Slippery Situation - Chapter 1
I've gone with a 3rd-person narrative, because sod 1st-person xd! chapter 1 really isn't all that scary at all, save for one or two visual images, hence why it'll get a 'general' rating.
Ander - Part 6: Subchapter 128
My style throughout this story has been 3rd person narration, but told through only one pov at a time. this made it incredibly difficult for me to mention any of the 'clues' without the character noticing it, too.
Intertwined - Prelude Part 1
I want a chance to experiment with 3rd person and multiple characters and see how well i like writing like this and how well it reads too (: so it is going to be a lot different from at42, but at the same time i hope you still see my style written all over
forced sub chpt 2
If not i can try to write next chapter as a 3rd person....oh well let me know what you think. ps i hope this was written better then the first.
Qest Primal - Chapter 32: Riichi
The 3rd person was a youthful looking dog, a schnauzer, dressed in a vest shirt combo; young enough that at the age of 35, he was the second youngest person in the room after rosemary. on his lapel was the company logo for vav.
An Erotic Weekend, Part 1
The original was written in a present-tense style (or a "2nd-person perspective"), so half my work was changing it to 3rd-person perspective to make it flow better.
A Midnight Spring Walk
I'm writing this in a different pov because i want to test myself if i'm more capable to write in a 3rd person perspective rather than the 1st, so this of this as a self-assessment for me while this is just entertainment for you readers.
how would you like to die?
Well about 7'7 brown with white front classic fox colours, his clothes where some shorts that had stains on the croth sex stains and his shurt read "if you can read this your too close" mind you it was so tiny you'd have to get close to read it, and the 3rd
A Dream Come True, part 9/10
3rd person pov xavier sat in the driver seat of the car looking oddly at jamie who seemed to be raging world war three in his head, then all of a sudden his face became tranquil. "uuuhhh...you ok?"
There is a human in my life! (Corrected)
I was a little confused because of that new style: 3rd person narration. i hope you like it.about the story: the same story from a different perspective. nothing special.
Tales of Daemia CH1: Rude Awakening
Im not really sure how to do this... so i'm going to switch between 1st and 3rd person depending on where i need it. check for the inner monologue. this is just a little story/series i've had in the back of my mind for a while.