The Trouble with Tauren
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Chapter 1 : All Hope is Lost
Feel free for critisism, though none of this hate mail i know i will probably be getting. and for the record, ask any questions you may have and i will answer to the best of my ability.
A Better Friendship -- Chapter 2: Young Love Ever Grows
Oh, and any critisism is welcome...as long as it's helpful! :) i'd like to know what you guys think of the change in my style!
The House of Dahan part V: Chen Dominates
#6 of dahan **any comments on the story are welcome, particulary constructive critisism. any thing you like/dislike/love/hate, things you'd like to see and things you'd hate to see. i want to know it all!
The Gate-Way: Chapter 10 – Dazed And Confused
As always all comments, constructive critisism and suggestions are welcome and greatly appreciated. i hope you enjoy this chapter.
Vampirism
All comments/critisisms/questions/requests welcome. hope you enjoyed it.\*
First Day Camping
This is my first upload, please leave comments and critisism so i can improve! thanks for viewing! he swung the mallet a final time, burying the last stake deep into the soil.
The Dovahkiin's Lair
critisisms and suggestions are welcome. the dovahkiin's lair by lostsoul666 the dragonborn slid off his horse shadowmere, and readied himself for the task ahead.
The Gate-Way: Chapter 11 – Betrayal Explained
As always all comments, constructive critisism and suggestions are welcome and greatly appreciated. i hope you enjoy this chapter.
DANgER - kEEP AWAY
I've ackwardly translated yiff scenes to this format, so i'd appreciate any advice, critisisms, or general abuse if you're willing to share.
The wolves Chapter 4: Dragon tales
And as always be nice (constructive critisisms) chapter 4: dragon tales reist lifted the pieces of wood, with the help of frostfoot. he kept glancing at the light blue dragon, still getting used to the sight.
a magical night (alpha and omega)
I would appreciate some constructive critisism, thanks.