Runaway Hostel Chapter 1
I won't mind some constructive critisism :3_ _anyways, i delay_ _you long enough. enjoy!
Finding a Mate: Chapter 3
///// ok folks....comments, critisism and the like appreciated
The Gate-Way: Chapter 10 – Dazed And Confused
As always all comments, constructive critisism and suggestions are welcome and greatly appreciated. i hope you enjoy this chapter.
First Day Camping
This is my first upload, please leave comments and critisism so i can improve! thanks for viewing! he swung the mallet a final time, burying the last stake deep into the soil.
The wolves Chapter 4: Dragon tales
And as always be nice (constructive critisisms) chapter 4: dragon tales reist lifted the pieces of wood, with the help of frostfoot. he kept glancing at the light blue dragon, still getting used to the sight.
The Uncorrupted
Looking primarily for constructive critisism to improve my writing skills :) and yes, i use the word "it" a lot in refering to the undead creature.
Arcturus Chapter I: A derelict ship.
** **any comments on the story are welcome, particulary constructive critisism. any thing you like/dislike/love/hate, things you'd like to see and things you'd hate to see. i want to know it all!
The Dream
. ^\_^ i welcome all critisism. this is the first part in a series that i hope to make atleast three stories long. scince this is the first story bare with it. i know this one is a little choppy and stuff but the second one will be a lot better.
Tree Top Stories Pt. II
Both positive and negative critisisms welcome. tree top stories pt. ii several nights had passed since the first time the relationship between kyle and shane had began to bloom.
The House Dahan
So this beeing my first story of any kind ever, i'm expecting many of the more experienced writers (i.e. anyone with at least two stories) might be able to provide some constructive critisism, please do so.
The Gate-Way: Chapter 12 – Celebrating A Job Well Done
As always all comments, constructive critisism and suggestions are welcome and greatly appreciated. i hope you enjoy this chapter.
A Better Friendship -- Chapter 2: Young Love Ever Grows
Oh, and any critisism is welcome...as long as it's helpful! :) i'd like to know what you guys think of the change in my style!