Not So Retired Any More III
This one's got some man on man loving, some plot deepening, and so on. please let me know what you think!
The Avian's Apprentice: Chapter 9 - Crossing the River
Also it seems that there are some plots being planned against her...and all other beasts. kicit is an avian caster apprenticed under one of the nine masters; the black corvid master elacce.
"Will of the Alpha" Book Review
On its own, again, this would not be a major issue, but it's placed in the book directly alongside "the new toy" and "breaking in," both of which it shares some plot and storyline elements with and neither of which yanked me out of the story in
The Avian's Apprentice: Chapter 13 - Progenitors
Also it seems that there are some plots being planned against her...and all other beasts. kicit is an avian caster apprenticed under one of the nine masters; the black corvid master elacce.
A Good Substitution
And while he still didn’t know what was going on, he was starting to get the feeling that this wasn’t some plot…trico never got the way about anything like that.
Nations- chapter one
Many turned inward, some plotted. all gave the otherkin communities more reason to separate themselves from the immoral core of humanity. it was only at the peak of tensions that the government realized it was on the verge of civil war.
All's Fair - Part 9
I expect my grammar could use some work, and quite possibly there are some plot holes i didn't catch that you could shove a house through. if you see any of that, or anything else worth mentioning, please let me know. thanks again.
Getting Trolled
I prefer stories that have some plot and character development, whereas these short stories are really just excuses for me to play with quick moments or sex.
A King's Legacy Ch.17
Could threaten to consume their very world, learned that he would, in fact, undeniably have to face the legendary beasts someday… and, perhaps the most painful… aster learned that someone he thought of as a true friend only saw him as a threat now… as some plotting
A Witch's Diary, Part 4
"you mean for me to join you in some plot against alderach?" "i mean for you to consider how many more veterans of his war must suffer by his hands, that is all."
Found (Ch. 9)
"and you're sure that that's not just part of some plot to observe me in secret?" ulric said, checking behind himself as though the two were going to be right there. vernon rolled his eyes just as his ears perked up.
Avatar of Corruption 5: Enter Chastity Part 1
We got one kind of action in the first part here, a different kind at the end, and a little of the later kind and some plot development in the middle. i hope you guys enjoy. also, i've started a patreon if you'd like to support me and my writing.