Mysterious visit
Bulbasaur didn't take too kindly to the critisism of his trainer however, as he released a small stun spore in scav's direction paralyzing the poor dragon. "ack...i was just trying to help..."
Summer Nights - Chapter One
Allrighty all, this is my first story, so please, lay the critisism on heavy, that's the only way that i'll get better. hoping to make a sequal to this, eventually, i guess we'll see. enjoy!
Chris Klebb Versus Anthro Island: The Sexumentary
Constructive critisism is the best._**
The Gate-Way: Chapter 5 – Secrets Revealed
As always all comments, constructive critisism and suggestions are welcome and greatly appreciated. i hope you enjoy this chapter.
The shaman of the sun
I want to be critisiced, not sure how that is written, on everything. of course if you see problems with grammar forgive me, i don't talk english all the time, you know living in mexico and everything.
Dark Moon Alley
I \<3 critisism i could use it.
The House Dahan, Chapter IX: A Glorious day
No really, don't pull any punches on constructive critisism, it's the only way to improve as a writer.** blablabla, diclaimer stuff here, please read tags and please enjoy!
Sexual Adventures Of Jordan
All she can do is critisize me and put me down." she rubs her upper left arm lightly where the bruise was when she first got there from her grandmothers room.
Intellective
Comments and constructive critisism are very welcome! =) many thanks. -ren
The Gate-Way: Chapter 7 – Preparation Begins
As always all comments, constructive critisism and suggestions are welcome and greatly appreciated. i hope you enjoy this chapter.
Escape into Dragon's Love Story I of III of the Dragon's Love Trilogy
"i am riddiculed enough by my kind for my small size, i do not need to be critisized by you human. besides i am still very young and have more growth to take through my years. in time i will tower over you." she speaks again before fluttering her wings.
The Gate-Way: Chapter 13 – A Proposition Made
As always all comments, constructive critisism and suggestions are welcome and greatly appreciated. i hope you enjoy this chapter.