the clash of the immortals
This is just a rough draft, any and all constructive critisism will be greatly appreciated. i know that this is probably a giant steaming pile of crap compared to the other writers on sofurry, but it's my first giant steaming pile of
Guard dog!
Please ffeel free to leave feedback, critisism is always wellcome too the morning after passed like any other... boring classes, hard classes, then lame classes, followed by harder classes.
Arcturus Prelude : Flaming Skies
#2 of arcturus **any comments on the story are welcome, particulary constructive critisism. any thing you like/dislike/love/hate, things you'd like to see and things you'd hate to see. i want to know it all!
A new school chapter 2: Adam's family
I dunno.. some people say i write good... others say .... different things :p but still.. any constructive critisism is appreciated ^.^ and leave comments if you want the story to continue! ~your friendly neighborhood freaky fox jake
My Awesome 4/20
Thanks for deciding to choose my story for your viewing pleasure ^^ i welcome constructive critisism and comments on what you think of the story.
The Gate-Way: Chapter 11 – Betrayal Explained
As always all comments, constructive critisism and suggestions are welcome and greatly appreciated. i hope you enjoy this chapter.
The Gate-Way: Chapter 1 – A Bond Strengthened
Any and all constructive critisism, comments and suggestions are greatly appreciated. i hope you all enjoy reading what i have put together.
Of Wolf and Man: Chapter one
As allways comments, questions, and critisism are all welcome
Make a Wish: Chapter 1
It's the first story i've published in about 5 years, so please be constructive with your critisism. thank you for taking the time to read it. enjoy. adrian sat nonchalantly sipping at his drink while he awaited the arrival of his guests.
The Gate-Way: Chapter 5 – Secrets Revealed
As always all comments, constructive critisism and suggestions are welcome and greatly appreciated. i hope you enjoy this chapter.
Athalus and the God of domination
* * * gosh, i didnt know i could write so much hehe, please write critisism, ideas fornew stores and etc in the comments
The House Dahan part III: Home Alone
#4 of dahan **any comments on the story are welcome, particulary constructive critisism. any thing you like/dislike/love/hate, things you'd like to see and things you'd hate to see. i want to know it all!