Movements on the Surface
His work was a tad sloppy in places, but he needed as much time as possible to redo that pen and ink piece that he scrapped. he was really regretting it now. soren came back late again, after 9:00.
Nature Film: Mating Habits of Canines
He did ask her if they could redo the "mounting" scene again, he thought he could do it better. sierra told him only if they could redo the "69 position" scene again.
Kathrin's Specialty Outfitters: part 3
She needed to concentrate while cutting fabric to make an exact fit, or redoing visible stitching, but sythe filled every moment of silence with conversation. she was saved, by all people, by clovis.
Wolfblood Chronicles chapter one
"alright then thats understandable, are you going to go to the king so you can tell him of this problem" "i don't know if i will have the time because i will have to redo the garrisons duty roster and i think i might have speed up training of some more troops
Delayed destiny ch 15
I'm probably going to scrap this whole first write and redo it all sometime in the future when i'm a better writer. for now let me know what i can do to improve the story quality.
A fox's struggle - 03 - Home life
. --- jay's detention took the form of an entire hour cleaning the boys locker room and bathroom, scrubbing toilets, sweeping the locker area and hosing out the showers while the janitor watched and made him redo things he said were 'half assed'.
Heritage of Ash Chapter 2: Foreboding
redoing of chapter 2. hopefully this is a longer, more detailed version. enjoy ^^ **heritage of ash-ch. 2: foreboding** it was just before midday, the burning sun's lingering over the smoldering remains of the once overseer's manor.
Defenders of Evodusai Part 10
"lets redo this meeting, alright?" he then preceded to turn around in circles a couple of times before extending his right paw forward. "hello winta! my name's haless and it's so good to finally meet you.
The Not So Simple Life [reloaded] Chp 1: A meeting of minds, closer to when world colide
Life well its here the first scene from the reworking of my first series, this particular bit originally was only 300 words now its over 1600, and i feel good with it, as always point out what i did wrong in order to make me feel self conscious and have to redo
The Story of Xion
In being my fault, he made it my task to redo weeks of research in a single day, or my job would be going to someone more competant. i knew exactly who he claimed to be more competant, his own son.
KC's Story-preview
He requested a western theme, so i figured we would redo the room as a barn, ya know.... hay bails along the walls, um maybe rearranging the tables to allow for some square dancing...
Down for the Count - Chpt 3
I had to redo it and that only irritated me more. "i'm coming." bucky had a lot of words stirring on his face. i could tell. but it only made me want to punch each one off. i hated how he looked to me from above.