Duty Chapter 25: A Needed Calm
"i guess alex is one of them," he said, "...i mean...uh...i mean...you know...in critical condition..." jerry placed his hand on joji's shoulder, "go home, joji. we can take care of things around here."
Merge - 00 - Prologue
Constructive criticism is welcomed. unconstructive criticism is not. image is of matt lancaster, the main character, a husky.
Silanna's Song- Chapter 1
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choose your own erotic Pokemon story 7
You tell dusk, as he swoops in low and hits noctowl, knocking him unconscious, it was a critical hit!
Rexi & Talon: 15 -- Rexi
Why was it critically important to send a messenger to the goldsmith, and tell him _do not proceed on my order_. what order? who was zackton working with? why? rexi was practically grinding his teeth.
What Universe am I In??? Chapter: 0 (intro)
Constrictive criticism appreciated!
Chapter 3: Expect the Unexpected
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Obsession
After many observations, i found the term excessive, but i heard him without criticizing. myself, i already knew this feeling, but i will talk you about this soon. little, he often has rejected.
Vargothen - Constructing A Foundation (Session 2)
We take down 2 zombies near us... the 2 zombies moving to the archers take damage as well... the warrior, and ebeis, are both seriously wounded, i am critically wounded at this point...
NAS characters.txt
Read this first: i would be the happiest to any constructive criticism. i have so far created and designed every character by myself, with the exception of taking inspiration from other works(but then, think nothing is really new.
Enemy, Chapter 3
"the buffer's going critical! the energy is feeding back into the ship's systems and i can't redirect the reaction without causing an overload or a burnout."_ _electronics were smoldering.
Under The Cherry Blossoms Part Nine
Crit - short for critical hit. chc - critical hit chance. aggro- aggression.