Red Shadow
I probably won't be accused of killing them; the police know my m.o. and know that i don't use guns, but their captain is a known critic of mine. i'm going to die. i don't know when or where.
Seth Uchiha Background, WIP (Not looking for criticism, just to let people know how Seth was raised)
Seth Uchiha was born in the year 25 ANT (After the Nine Tails) at the beginning of the Fourth Great Ninja War waged by an old ninja, a revived ninja, Madara Uchiha on the current Shinobi Allied Forces. Currently the war has been going on for nine...
Yes, Sir | by DolphinSanity
That little "crybaby" sting at the end of the sentence was his inner critic passing judgment on... everything. like it always did. himself, others, it didn't matter.
A Chance Encounter part two
I hope you enjoy, and once again i welcome criticism. i absolutely adore writing and would love to improve. * * * ornoth is my own character, snowie belongs to my boyfriend who i love ever so much
Brotherly Love: A One-Page Commission
Any criticisms? write a comment! i enjoy all criticism as long as it's constructive! thank you, shadowwulf1989 for the commission!
choose your own erotic Pokemon story 7
You tell dusk, as he swoops in low and hits noctowl, knocking him unconscious, it was a critical hit!
Delta Chronicles ch.2
"john is in critical condition." clarice said pointing to the bloodied arctic fox on the stretcher that jack had set up. "holy shit." jj commented quietly. suddenly a shower of bulletshit the ground just behind them.
The twinning roses
Please give me some constructive criticism and comments.
Wastelands-Chapter 31-The Dead City Part 4-A Critical Plea
_Dead Zones are scattered across the world's fallout zones. Ultra contaminated regions were incredibly high yield thermonuclear warheads were set off, radiation absorbed here is measured by thousands of Terrarads a second. Not even the strongest...
News Update about Confined
Thank-you for your dedication to the series, as i couldn't have had the inspiration to write this without your criticism and praise. have fun reading the next few chapters of my next story!
Merge - 00 - Prologue
Constructive criticism is welcomed. unconstructive criticism is not. image is of matt lancaster, the main character, a husky.
Love is not a Sin
Please be kind, i would like only constructive criticism.